Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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Hank really needed that win at the end. Hopefully everyone will be alright.
More plz
Excellent
Ok, during this entire thing, I really only had one thought. This isn't possible. These are creatures that it takes seven trained guards to take out just one. Yet Hank and Luna wipe their way through them like extras in a world war two movie. They take on and beat over a hundred of them, something that 700 royal guard would have real trouble with.
Don't get me wrong, I like the chapter and its a fun scene, but you kind of nerfed the bad guys to do it.
Also, I do like how you ended the chapter with Celestias resuscitation. Well done.
Monk
Thanks again Photon for another amazing chapter. Lots of great action, suspense, and drama throughout the chapter which had me on the edge of my seat for the entire read. Well done! In addition, I really enjoyed that suspenseful and tender moment at the end there with Hank desperately trying to, and celebrating, saving Celestia's life. Also, it was a nice surprise to see the novel way in which you explained how and why Celestia was suffocating there at the end, due to the blood congelation brought on by the extreme heat ect. Anyway, I'm very excited to see how the story goes on from this point and how Hank's relationship changes, hopefully for the better, with the Sisters after their recent shared ordeal. Thank you again for all the time and hard work you put into bring all of us this amazing story and I wish you the best of luck with writing your next chapter and your other planned HIE fanfic. Cheers!
I really like the details in this, even if some are very grim. I hope the continues a while longer and doesnt end now after maybe 1 or 2 epilogue chapters. Hope your other planned story is as good as this one and as always ”you alive? Fic dead?”
11441063
Thanks for reminding me this story existed its been like 7 months since I last checked up on it
Take your time with the chapters, and keep up the good work
This was fucking great, I can’t wait to see what happens in the next chapter, all of us will patiently, yet eagerly await what you bring forth next time.
Hell of a fight, I just hope his hands will be alright after using the Armor piercing technique with the sword bare handed.
PLUMP
Always love it when this story updates! Celestia and Hanks first kiss let's go (I don't care if it was medical, it counts lol)
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Awww 🥲 Hank really does care for Celestia now.
Well if this doesn't make Celestia elevate from a little crush to straight up falling in love with him after this, then I don't know what will 😅
11441331
The world's most disgusting,necrophilic, kiss. Very romantic indeed.
Loved this chapter and how they wouldn't give up even against overwhelming odds. I really loved how Celestia just totally annihilated them at the end! I'm glad Hank was able to save her, I thought she was a goner for sure with the way things were going.
whose
It's a possesive both of who and which.
There is a clumsy-formal alternative: "of which"
This is the first time I think that I’ve seen Tia go dead and get revived with medical techniques. Amazing job man! I do hope to see more real damn soon, I’d love to see how big of a change we’re talking here cause so far it looks like it’s going to be a doozy!
11441353
Where is that gif from? its so familiar but I can't remember the show. Also without giving much detail, things are going to change.
11441653
Man, why you doing this to yourself? You know better to come to this story and expect good grammar. I mean, c'mon, its me we're talking about here.
11441357
Glad you liked it, and the "hammer of dawn" scene is one of my favorites I've written so far. I just wish I could add sound design to a story cause I know in my head the scene is way cooler than I was able to get onto the page.
11441015
Thanks for the kind words. Glad you enjoyed it. I realllllllly hope to have the next chapter out around new years.
Why do I think that the one behind this will get personally involved?
11441331
Wait where?
Where does it say that?
11442350
Authors note on the latest chapter, if your referring to PLUMP
11442202
Peace. Errors or misuse may happen and be jarring for a reader. Or they can be insignificant.
That doesn't mean one can't try better. Your writing seriously improved over time, so there is positive sude. That phrase was confusing with "that is" in middle of it. Especislly for a foreigner. This is one of the best chapters.
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plump
Sweet baby Jesus I loved it
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Happy to hear it
God damn, this story is amazing.
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Happy you think so
The best part of this whole thing was Hank acting like a medic. Hands down, the best part.
A new H.I.E. story?! Oh hell yes! If its as good as what this one is then I'm REALLY looking forward to seeing it be written and released at some point.
I had mixed feelings starting this book, but I kept going and found out how utterly superb this story is. Hope to see more chapters soon, and good job!!
11472730
Glad you stuck with it through the first 10 or so chapters and have grown to like it. I do intend to go back and rewrite those eventually.
11474906
I think everyone or most can agree with that statement.
11476755
I'm learning towards running out of story. Ejoying it so far while remember thing's yes to come like the big fight with the black sculks in the clearing
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A lot has happened since then, and I must say my writing has gotten much better since 2018.