Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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So far so good in my humble opinion. Keep it up
I must say the first few chapters were okay but after this one things look more promising
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Thank you. I've been trying my best to improve and read good stories to model after so I'm glad to see that it's working.
Immediately stunned with the amazing taste I began to greedily take gulp after gulp of water only stopping when I ran out of breath. “Oh god is that good!” I exclaim wiping my mouth dry, “I should bottle and sell this stuff! Well I should probably filter it first, just watch I’m gonna get a damned parasite or somethin’..... Oh well, worth it.”.
Helloooooooooo dysentery. Nah, mostly kidding. I ended up having my characters doing the same thing in my story.
I hope he can't transmit the virus to the ponies, viruses don't get killed out of your body like bacteria do. Viruses in all likelihood will stay with you for the rest of your life.
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He can't. I thought about that too but I decided that I didn't want the story to go in that direction. The virus is actually only communicable to humans, all other animals on earth were left unaffected, other than being food for the infected. I'm going to explore this point in the story, don't know when yet but eventually.
Is it wrong i actually feel somewhat bad for the Timber Wolves?
Empiezo a dudar pero voy a seguir leyendo
Empiezo a dudar pero voy a seguir leyendo, espero que solo sea una trama temporal
How did he know the manticore was female
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Going off of the Equestrian Manticore, its head and main body is all lion. Remember the difference between grown up Simba and Nala? It has to do with fur.
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I was going off of the fact that Lilith was on her side and he saw her equipment, I know my writing is clunky so I can see where the confusion is from.
Ooh that rhymed better than the first one
Random human in Equestria: SHUT UP YOU STUPID WOLVES!!! (Tosses grenades randomly into the forest.) Finally some peace and quiet!
I feel sorry for Ponyville they must be freaked out with all that gunfire going on in the forest
His name is hank
propane and propane accessories
Isn't Applejack coat Orange? I know her her is blond so you do u ring that part of yellow? Poor timber wolfs. They be. Going extinct at this rate
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those were my thoughts as well.
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Dammit, Bobby!
Just like the founding fathers intended
Reading this again...I wonder if I stopped because I wasn't happy with the story or I simply ran out of story to read...well I have about 3 years of catching up to do so I'll find out soon I guess
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These early chapters are shit so I wouldn't be surprised either way.
I think it is a good story so far great job 👍👍👍👍👍👍💕💕💕💕💕💕
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Honestly, it's one of the better stories that I believe I've ever read. Seeing as I have read the thing several times and have thoroughly enjoyed it.
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You make think the early chapters of this story are shit tier, but I'm really not so sure about that, honestly. Seeing as how I have read this entire story several times, including the earlier chapters and thoroughly enjoyed it. Along with me also having this story saved in my library for my reading pleasure.
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Now that they are presented as somewhat sapient with a culture ( ceremony for the dead), yeah i can undestand that. It's normal when you realize something is capable of complex emotions.
Don’t think I’ve ever seen a depiction of the timberwolve’s perspective or them communicating. Nice.