Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
Page generated in 0.038 seconds
Total duration
829 users online
621,985 hits today, 2,205,040 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
24.000 words, damn that's a long chapter
i expect that the next chapter will come quicker
........................right?
8717395
Hopefully my dude but no promises.
8717380
Yes it is extremely long, I apologize for any inconvenience reading.
especially?
manner
appreciate
Apostrophes don't pluralize. There are multiples of this.
mellow
retard
should have
in control
missing quotes. You have this throughout the fic, actually.
bad wording here.
8717696
Thanks, I'll get on those. Most of this was written after ten at night when I was dead tired, hope it doesn't show too much.
8717797
A number of areas where the wording (or the punctuation) is weird/distracting. But readable, after a fashion.
And it was such a nice shotgun.
8718749
While I usually agree that cutting down guns, of any kind, is kinda dumb but Hank already had a full length shotgun better for combat in the Remington. I wanted to give him something to completely destroy targets at extremely close range. A truck gun if you will.
Forgot to like lol.
8744574
Oh well thanks for doing that, glad you like, I neglect to do that from time to time as well. I really need to do a better job of that.
All together, this is a really well done fic. There are a few spelling errors and grammatical mistakes here and there, but that's pretty common.
Most of all, i like the character development and the reactions the ponies have to his actions and abilities. No prey species will immediately accept something that is capable of what Hank is, and you portray that very well.
I'm really enjoying this fic, and greatly anticipate seeing what happens next!
8749412
I'm super glad you like it and that you can excuse my stupid writing mistakes. I'm also elated beyond belief that the characters seem good and somewhat natural. My only problem now is that Hank may be a little OP. I hope that what I've done with making him disabilitated to being on an empty stomach evens out the field a little.
Also, he made a force-a-nature, lol.
8750948
Yep just over under in configuration and a little bit longer... plus no stock. The idea is the same though.
Missed the notifications...
Better late than never!
Hell yeh!
Braeburn!!!
8757488
Of course. I had to include him if Hank went to Appleloosa.
Ok, I finally caught up with this. But I don't have much to say, at least nothing good.
Well nothing more to add than what KitsuneNoYomeiri already pointed out.
Not that I could do better, I still prefer german, much easyer to speak and write.
But now the good part about your Story:
Was zu Hölle? Hank is written relatively realistic, well a bit OP, but that is good. Especially with the way you counter it. Wich makes me dislike him.
Now get your Baumkuchen, chocolate cake, Grog, tea, coffee and beer.
The conversation with Luna was just a i.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/original/000/602/354/526.jpg
9094689
All aboard
como luna no lo olio si usa ropa sudada, mas escenas incomodas
media.tenor.com/images/3254a2afd60d4a6a79a3f9ad73201780/tenor.gif
*shoots at the sun* *world goes dark*
Do I even need to point out what’s wrong with this sentence? So many innuendos in this chapter.....
9737310
Innuendo is fun.
Sweet Christ we're talking about this again. Also the end of the Appaloosa trip was randomly homoerotic for. some. reason?
I’m calling the atf
10839051
I dont care, I have a sawed off shotgun. And you can't stop me from doing it again.
Chciałbym tylko to podsumować
Ludzkość w twojej Equestrii
- Zwiększona siła ( Przeciętny człowiek byłby na poziomie przeciętnego kucyka ziemi) bo grawitacja
- Największa wytrzymałość ( w tym przodujemy w większości ficów w tym nie MLP )
- Niewrażliwość na magię ( koszmar każdego bojowego maga )
- Zwiększona prędkość ( Dzięki grawitacjo! rozpieszczasz nas:) )
- Doświadczenie i wiedza bojowa ( zależy JAKI człowiek z JAKIEJ Ziemi )
- Psychicznie lepiej radzimy sobie z zabijaniem ( Jako wszystkożercy-drapieżniki i ludzie)
Jesteśmy rasą OP i w pojedynkę z mądrych gatunków tylko smoki są gorsze ( z oczywistych powodów) w grupie i z nowoczesną bronią potrzeba by doświadczonej armii aby nasz pokonać ( z ziemską armią nie mają szans). W innych nieobiektywnych wersjach Equestrii szansę również są na naszą korzyść. Bardziej do rozdziału Egzekucja przywódcy była za*****ta, super opis robisz jedne z lepszych.
11133272
Wasze opinie są bardzo mile widziane, bardzo lubię je czytać i mam nadzieję, że zrobicie więcej. Zawsze chciałem pojechać do Polski i trochę poczytać po polsku, ale wciąż musiałem korzystać z translatora google. Cieszę się, że podoba Ci się ta historia i chciałbym usłyszeć, co masz do powiedzenia w przyszłości. Kucyki nietoperzy również pojawią się w historii w późniejszym czasie, ponieważ kultura Hanksa jest rzeczywiście taka sama, jak ich szkocka i irlandzka. Niech żyje Polska.
And the pony equivalent to the ATF
11133321
Widzisz czytam tę historię trzeci raz co jest naprawdę wielkim komplementem z mojej strony bo pamiętam większość fabuły książek przeczytanych 6-8 lat temu. Czasami to przeszkadza bo nie potrafię ich przeczytać ponownie ale twojej się udaje. W każdym razie chodzi o to że dopiero teraz widzę tę odpowiedź bo z jakiegoś powodu nie otrzymuję powiadomień, co do treści niezmiernie mnie cieszy twoje zainteresowanie Polską i masz mój szacunek. Co do Teastrali nie mogę się ich doczekać po Lunie i Celestii są moimi trzecimi ulubionymi kucykami.
11590621
Better late than never my friend. New chapter is well under way, if not a little slow.
One of these days i'm going to read a story where Braeburn isn't gay. Just for a change of pace.
11613564
Actually impossible to find one. You'll probably have to write it yourself.
For a successful scavenger, MC doesn’t seem to have a grasp on priority missions or resource management. Braeburn’s mention of gas in Dodge was worth it, but maybe there needed to be mention of a rumor about it in Appleoosa?