Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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Dont see many stories were Zecora is a big part of the plot lately. Nice change of pace really.
("you of" happens twice)
You're slipping.
re-word this.
Tense feels weird here. Try "back away" and "give me space" instead, then reformat the rest of the sentence.
Also lots of double-spaces. You seem terrified of commas and ramble a bit in those paragraphs.
Please sir, may I have another?
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Commas are scary dude. Can you blame me? Just look at this thing [ , ] Disgusting. I had to contain it in brackets even.
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Commas are not that scary, you just have to know how to handle them.
Now don't look at me, I don't know how to do that, I'm german after all!
But at least you're not overusing those annoying things. Maybe you should just write all that in a easy to understand language like, say, german? No other language is that soft spoken and easy!
But don't you think Hank was a little bit soft on Thunderlane? He could'ce gone into more details.
Und jetzt hol dir deinen Baumkuchen ab! Oh and your cake, coffee, tea and Grog.
Have a great time.
I really cant wait for the next chapter
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Soon... ish
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Fuck yeah!
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Same
Interesting story so far. Eager for more!
Shite, I caught up...
This story is amazing! I realized after reading it until 5am that maybe it was time go to sleep. Then i woke up and finished the book
Please continue this awesome story!
Abra sistema de manada aqui , porque sería perfecto
Um...I'm sorry I thought you just said THE TIMBER WOLF WOULD HAVE GONE AWAY
Seriously? I usually don't do stuff like this but that...that is beyond idiotic. Thats flat out brain damage.
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Birds are known to lack in the brain department.
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Hold on now, they are in Equestria, remember? You just insulted the birds of Equestria, they are much smarter than him.
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Pecking order. First there's Hank then there's lilithe, lilithes pride, then luna followed by Celestia, celestias guards, then we have the bird's, the dirt, the worms in the dirt, and finally Thunderline
Getting a little concerned with Hank. Ponies seem to accept that he came from a bad place, but he absolutely refuses to let them try to explain their culture and values to him. There are some bad things that have happened in Equestria, but He doesn’t accept that he’s not in that bad place he came from anymore. He thinks he’s always in the right and rejects anything that says otherwise.
Not sure what will convince him to consider adapting to the new environment rather than him trying to force the environment to adapt to him.