Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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I only have one problem with this story, there is not enough of it.
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I apologize, I'm starting on the new chapter now though so don't fret!
8411597 Ditto. This is pretty good. Dash's hate is to be expected. Twilight's is saddening, but more or less understandable. I can see it. Celestia's take on it though is a bit striking. One would think that with her experience, she would be more curious and a bit less judgemental. The caution, well DUH! He's capable and lethal and not afraid of much except being truly open with folks about his past. Given the hints at some of the things he's experienced, that's understandable too. Honestly, aside from a few things in the first few chapters and the occasional spelling error, I find myself very much drawn to and enjoying this story. As my Campbell Clan Scottish ancestors would say, 's noo bad'.
Would food from earth have any averse effects on the ponies? If everything from earth is resistant to magic and ponies have evolved around using their magic to flush things out of their system, wouldn't eating his food possibly make them not able to handle digestion as well as food found in equestria?
Ubiece sido perfecto si le ubiece dado una nalgada a luna por venganza
i cant get enough of this comedy
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Same, mate.
Good lord I can feel that walking comment. Nothing is more embarrassing then finding out that not only do you walking like a woman but can also perform a catwalk better then 70% of actual fucking women
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Indeed, my main intention was to have something that Hank was embarrassed about but I did go a little overboard so talk of such things does lessen over the chapters moving forward.
I gotta say I'm enjoying the story so far, I like how there's alot of romance option popping up, and I like how the Apple Family in a way are taking Hank in as one of there own. Also I think with how you described how Hank sounds fits the voice I was giving him, which was basically Arthur Morgan.
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C'MON DUTCH! THIS FAT PONY ASS GOT ME QUESTIONING MY LOYALTY TO THE CAMP!