Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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Why did you make the chapters so long?
dam i have to wait a few more months fuck
good chapter tho
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Dude its better to be a long chapter than a short one. It means you get more stuff to read until the next time, which is gonna be in a couple of months. Don’t be dissin’ the long chapters bro
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Because I am a fool
WOOHOOOOOO!!!!
It's good to see this story getting the likes it deserves!
Still in my top 10 list
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I'm delighted to hear it hold such a high spot.
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There's a lot of I-didn't-edit-this-and-just-posted-it-in-a-rush mistakes like this.
any more*
its
psychopath
If you pass me a Google Docs link for editing suggestions I'll clean it up for you. Future chapters, too.
I can just hear "Hell to Pay" by 'miracleofsound' playing in the background during the fighting scenes...
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Ha, I actually listened to that while writing a few of the scenes, along with the original DOOM ost.
Please continue
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!
I WILL NOT ACCEPT THIS
I WANT THE NEXT CHAPTER BY TOMORROW
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please (cry in the background)
Hay I love your story and the fighting but mabey turn down the fighting a little and do a little more "story". I still love the story so far just i kinda feel it's a little slow still thanks for the grate reed.
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That's just... that ain't gonna happen man. A month would be a bit fast.
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(extremely loud crying from far away)
ma hart ma soul
LET THE BODIES HIT THE FLOOR!!!
I liked this chapter a great deal. Your balance of badass and realism has improved drastically since you started.
more perspective on what girls do
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I'm glad the he doesn't seem so OP now , I tried to balance this chapter out more, I'm pleased to see it worked.
9142247 It is well balanced on the... shall we say 'giving and receiving' of wounds as well as the reaction times, the necessity of high ground for accurate shooting, the shaking hands were a very appropriate touch considering the blood loss. Overall, a great loooong fight scene. Very little character development from Hank, but a bit of explaining from the Xenophobic Ponies thinking the worst about him... like always. I thought there was a guard who liked Hank? And I thought there was some sort of punishment for the one who attempted to murder him.
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Clover doesn't mind Hank but he does think he's crazy, I didn't portray that very well when he and bolt were introduced so that's my bad. As for thorn, hes still in the hospital. Clover has taken over his position.
Very nicely done here with the Shuck Nest.
9170364 Sure and good luck hitting them, much less hit one while in a life or death struggle and the target head was moving.
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I dont see why Hank would care about what a weapon 'should' be used for.
Apocalypse > Proper weapon usage
New chapter???
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Pft... I know right, this asshole writer is taking too damn long.
Nah but seriously shouldn't be too far off.
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Yay!!! Finally!!! Praise the sun!!! Ho ho ho bitches!!!
I think it was the first time the phone was mentioned?
The only MRE better then the spaghetti was the chili mac. The beef pattie and back in the day the vegie burger were pretty bomb too and the newer sausage and pancakes are delicious. Ohhhh memories
I hear both Reaper and Bakugo.
Man that thing with the sun reminds me almost of the ending of red. dead redemption 2
Did that grin made him meany like Pinky thinks he is or did it fail?
More funny words: noscelonce, concoughany
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He plays music from it alot. i think this is the first time he took photos with it.