Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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Very nice toad...
Oh and the story's good too
Yooooo
This chapter was awesome. I am adoring the interaction between all, am glad to see a bit more of Hank's choices and control on his actions. 20/10
As a solution to your problem with Discord; do not disturb is your friend!
Sorry to hear about the tonsillitis and I hope you're doing better now.
Honestly the only story I'm keeping up with.
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Yeah that was a while ago, thank you for the well wishes though.
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I'll give that a go
10473334
I'll try to do better on getting more updates out then.
10472934
Glad you're enjoying it so much, I'm gonna try and get the next chapter out much faster.
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Toad
Man I actually hollered out with joy when I saw this updated. I love this story and waiting for the next update is pure torture lol. Thanks for a amazing read!
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Hypno toad
Can we get a picture of a frog every new chapter?
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Perhaps
I can't wait for the next episode of this because of the story it made me write something like it it's called down the railway and it's a series of stories I'm still working on keep up the good work.
10474399
Dont know how you found inspiration out of this thing man, but the fact you did brings me much joy.
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Since their world is the same as the one you have in the story but they were bring into this world differently and sadly my characters car is slightly bigger than yours since it's a US military Titan you know those very big cars Dar using the Iraq I'm just hoping I can finish off some of the chapters so I can start publishing it while I'm working on it.
I can't wait for the day our lovely hero gets accepted to go to the Gala.
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Best of luck with your story, I hope it goes smoothly.
WHOO! Now that was a great chapter!
Great chapter. It's about time somebody called Dash out on her racist bullshit. Her pride has rendered her blind. Getting some great character development from several different characters at the same time and doing it very organically. Excellent.
for discord to stop it beeping at you easiest way is be on DND i hate those shocking noises anytime any notification pops (even if i have the servers muted smh)
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Always enjoy reading your comments, glad you continue to enjoy this story.
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That mistake was extra funny considering Hank just looked between his legs without any extra comments on what he saw there. XD
10479765 Oh HELL YEAH! This has been one of my favorites since I saw it.
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I'm flattered, I always love seeing the same people comment.
Nice chapter
So finally got back into this story after awhile
mostly waiting for a nice backlog to read throughand I’m glad to see one of em finally slipped and let lose what the fuck happened to hank to make him as he is. It was getting tiring and repetitive with twilight and dash being antagonists. So great job finally spilling some of the beans to perhaps maybe JUST maybe make em actually think and I also must say dash is always a hit or miss. Sometimes she is the instigator sometimes she is the buddy to the MC it’s real interesting seeing how people see dash. Anyways glad to see this and can’t wait for more!Now to find another read to hold me....fuck
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Thought so. Otherwise there wouldn't be much of an issue in "death" of one of the princesses. They'd just... "got better". Doesn't really work in a story like yours since devalues death quite significantly. So, they just doesn't age or do so by a few orders of magnitude slower.
I’m loving how the story is going, The story is moving slowly yet somehow I don’t find a single moment of it boring or tedious. Hank is plain and simply unique, he’s edgy and cold yet you manage to portrait his emotion so well, I like how you are slowly cracking his stone heart, it doesn't feel force. Honestly for being your first story in this site it’s quite amazing.
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I tent to think of alicorns being less likely killed by minor woulds. In reality one may get surprised how little required to kill in long run. A cat's scratch may turn into nightmare not every modern doctor can recognize in time to act, if particular infection would reach a major lymph node. Any cut into abdomenal area? Without modern medocine it was death sentence
That bacteria or similar mechanisms might also be a vehicle of that resiliance.
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I'd say your line of thinking is very similar to my own in regards to alicorn resistance and bacterially added resistance in Hank's case. I would put alicorns above him however.
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Thank you very much, even with the story moving slow, which I do know believe me, I'll be adding new conflicts soon, I have focused most of my energy in writing organic, somewhat "realistic" characters. Even though Hank is edgy I'm trying to put a point behind that edge not just make him a pizza cutter, all edge no point. I dont what him to be edgy just for the sake of being edgy. So for you you say that makes me beyond happy. Thank you.
I really enjoy the back and forth between Luna and Celestia, the sister moments are really nice. I also like the guiding of the story, first Celestia comes off like a bitch now she's starting to grow on me. Almost like Hank's punch showed her that she no longer is the biggest and baddest in the room which is making her reassess her priorities. Hank's heart to heart with Rarity was also done very well. What a lot of people don't understand is that survivor's guilt is a very real thing and can be very destructive for a person. Again well done Photon my duuude
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Thank you very much. The next chapter is maybe 33% written. It will be shorter.
Personally I think the length of the chapters is just fine, though that may be because I tend to like long chapters with a natural stopping spot and point of continuation for the next chapter. Anyway I finally caught up and just wanted to say something.
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Sweet, thanks for doing so, glad you're enjoying.
Fuck it. I'm rereading the entire thing. Congratulations cause this is the first story I have done this on.
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Yesssssssss fall prey to the corruption child.
Of all the gods of Chaos, the Blood God Khorne or the Plague Lord Nurgle, would be the best explanation for this guys durability pre Equestria. you haven't explained how, or if, they deal with the gender split. Zecora so far seems like the most likely lover for single partner relations, if try do go for the herd option I hope you can believably have Tia join.
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If pre tornado Hank was in 40k, which is what I think you're referencing, he'd probably be in the Death Krieg Corps but be the unlucky guy who keeps living.
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That does make more sense.
Second read through done.
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And in only a week, impressive.
10547504
Well I read 700,000 words of another story so my time was divided
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Yeah a lot faster than I could ever do but I'm a retard so, you know how it is.
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It's not a case of speed, I simply have an addiction that I am more than happy to feed.
i reread this in about 6 hours I NEED MORE MAN GOTTA FEED THE ADDICTION
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Fine I'll cut the chapter off where I'm at now and release it early. Dont say I never did nothin for ya.
Hopefully this won’t end badly.
But yeahhh go flutters, AJ, and Z for sticking up for their man/stallion or human.
Go hank harem/herd