Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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I always shout in joy when you update. Another great chapter. I look forward to the next one already!
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Tomorrow about mid day is when the next one will be out. And I'm glad you liked the massive wall of dialog for 18000 words.
You did a great job of giving a bunch of exposition without making it obvious or boring. On a side note, what is the probability that AJ and Hank become an item?
Absolute chunky boi of a chapter
Loved the background info on Hanks history, motivations and current feeling, Has to be one of my favorite "I'm not a good guy" speeches from a character in awhile.
The moment between Big Mac and hank was pretty neat as well, while I wouldn't call them kindred spirits in most aspects they shared a pretty common pain in loss.
Fantastic chapter all around
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He he he he heeeeeeeeeeeeee. You shall see.
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Thank you, even though it's a cliche theme, the whole speech thing, I still wanted to throw my hat in the ring and try it out.
hey! same
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Well shit you're even a professional. You have me beat. Good show old chap.
That escalated.
You know shits going down when he escorts like that.
New chapter whooooohoooo!
Only one problem...
Now I need to wait again
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Just a day I promise, well 10 hours now.
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I did my best to write it like how those military dogs press against their handler's legs when moving, that's what I imagined at least as I wrote it. Also I felt like I needed some action to break up all the talk.
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What?!!?
Is it Christmas already
Its midnight damm you, now I get even less sleep
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Itll still be here in the morning my man, get your sleep.
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I wrote a bunch over these two months so I figured I'd split it up a little, make it more palatable for you guys.
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The Sunk Cost Fallacy won't allow it.
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I have no clue what that is but I wish you the best.
It basically means, "I've committed to much to this to stop now"
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That makes sense now.
And done. I feel like you forced more out of hank than he would have, but he does have quite a few screws loose. Either way I enjoy the chapter. I think I'm entering the loopy stages now, so that'll be fun.
I can never get enough of this story. It's probably in my top 10 on fimfic.
Every chapter draws me in and I find myself sad whenever I run out of words to read each chapter. It's one of those, "I want it to last forever but all good things come to an end" kinda feelings.
Melancholy. That might be the best way I can describe it.
Tangent aside, this chapter really brings home how Hank is broken in the most technical way possible but at the same time, not unlikable.
The Q and Ahelp shed light to his background and his more than likely age without being a giant exposition block. I would say this was probably one of the best ways I've read exposition done. It didn't detract time away from the main conflict of the story unnecessarily, which is a plus
All in all, top tier work again. I'm looking forward to more and honestly, the wait is worth it.
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Lol to be fair that amount of read is nothing to me. I have reread diaries of a mad man, the chase, and many other long and notable stories repeatedly. If I love the story it doesn't matter if it's 200 words or 100,000 I'll read it with excitement and a open mind. Keep up the good work! Because it's been an amazing read so far!
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Yes, 100% yes.
Mooooreeeee lol. this chapter was amazing and it's nice to see you're still writing
This chapter... wow. I knew there had to be an exposition chapter with the Mane 6, but I did not think it would be like this. Excellent does not even begin to cover it. Well done. I look forward to much more!
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Thank you much, I've personally always liked the Q and A chapters in stories so I was looking forward to writing this one. Glad I'm not the only one to like it.
Jesus Crist, I knew his face was fucky but I didn't expected him to look like burn avocado who felt into a blender.
PD: loving the story as always, I am curious if he's gonna get other enhancements of powers.
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Hes not quite burn victim, deadpool, levels. I may have written it kinda weird, but he mostly just has cuts on his face. Primarily left side. I had a reference picture on my old computer I'll see if I can find it and I'll post it sometime. Good to see you I the comments as always my man.
plague inc in a nutshell
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Yeah, its exactly what I modeled that after lol
... Said zecora calmly.
Jestem jak Bic mac dopóki nie rozpocznie szału na niewinnych nie obchodzi mnie co zrobił i w mojej książce jest dobry. W końcu będąc kim jest przyciągnęło mnie do tej historii. W tym ficu złamałeś wiele typowych troopów i absolutnie to uwielbiam!
Fuck if I know what I'm doing reading this story. It's full of errors, pacing is all over, here we've had exposition dump worthy of Celestial holy bottom, but I dunno. It's interesting to read I guess?
But in all seriousness, quite an intriguing little story so far. PTSD is not fun, getting into heads of weird creatures is kinda my secret pleasure. Also some weird shit is going on in the Everfree, Lyra knows what humans are, and when Brae will join the harem? Questions, questions...
Binging ahoy! See y'all in later chapters : )
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Just gonna let you know that you're in the wrong spot for correct grammar and typical pacing. I'd like to say that it gets better butttttt that'd be a lie. Glad you're liking it though.
Well for now it’s only the two of them.
But maybe more mares perhaps in that very room or two could becoming with you too.
Soon
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Because MC won’t be sad if you get taken down, Rainbow Dash. Most of us aren’t happy with the way you’ve been acting, either.
Applejack seems to think she might still have a chance with MC despite knowing his relationship with Zecora. Does this imply herds are a thing in this universe?
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Perhaps