Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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when we goona get mor I want mor
Who are you planning on shipping together in this story, if so?
Good chapter.
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Wouldn't be surprised if it's gonna be a harem, then again it would fit him I think.
Edit: I am surprised the Princesses haven't hired him to train a group of guard to help with the Shuks or taught them how to make basic firearms
Oh yeah and awesome update
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who say's the princesses have even two brain cells between to all of them? all of them are pretty fucking stupid tbh, they're alienating the only being that is keeping ponyville from becoming an all you can eat buffet...
See update https://youtu.be/8RLPG88u3lM
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True, all they see is a Dangerous monster on Par with Sombra and Tirek. Not a being who is the only thing between the Shuks and their Subjects, They should be thankful that Redheart is in that town as it is the only thing keeping him there and protecting it.
If she dies, is subject to Pressure from the Princesses or otherwise leaves I would expect him to pack up, Grab Zecora and Hoof it to Zebrica or the Griffion lands. It's what I would do if I am honest, why protect a people who would leave me for dead in a heartbeat?
Write what, I didn't see nothing.
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Interesting because the only thing that can relate to my brain while writing this chapter is: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hT7x1NvGf5k
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So internal screaming then calmish randomness thoughts then screaming with a dash of what and the empty silence
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Exactly
If you're looking for ideas, maybe add some kind of conflict that forces equestrian to work with hank or seek help from him? Like some kind of Griffin (gryphon?) territory skirmish leads to a war and equestria gets a reality check when it loses the first battle. Maybe they seek out hank for his knowledge on killing or for training soldiers. I can just imagine Hank pulling a drill sergeant moment like the one from full metal jacket.
But eh, just some brainstorm ideas if you want em. Take it however you will. Regardless, I look foward to the next chapter!
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Ok first: you do know you have to ask me for permission to get a new chapter out for your own hard work, right?
second: Thank oyu that you ignore the first rule and got me a new chapter to enjoy, mostly.
But I think there is something you really need, seeing that I have plenty, have some from me.: ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Should be enough for this chapter ;)
No, really, thank you for the chapter. Even with it being the, well usual quality, wich I still am not the right person to be able to complain, with me being german and barely kniwing english enough to read some fan-fics and watch movies.
For your future plans, a little time jump would be helpful I think. Just wrapt all that up in a few slice of life chapter. And then maybe adopt
9723283 this little idea a shot, it sounds good enough. Maybe throw in some minotaur bandit raids and so on, let the everfree freak out one last time, or just mention it for the time jump.
all said, get your 2rings of Baumkuchen, some nice drink of your choice and maybe ice cream.
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Thanks man. Glad you think so.
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Glad you like it man but I have one question. What in hell is Baumkuchen?
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Oh it seems I shall continue my mission and bring our lord andsavior of all tasty cakes to you! But to put it simply: Baumkuchen is a kind of spit cake (wich is just a form of alayerd cake).
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But it tastes really awesome. Though just forget about all that industrial made, normed stuff and get the original from Salzwedel, when in Germany that is.(sadly they don't do international shipping.)
Oh and now I demand you bring that thing into your story, just to make your writing even harder.(and if you don't, I'll still enjoy this thing and just get me a baumkuchen. to eat.)
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Oh damn that looks really good. If I ever go to Europe for some reason I know where I'll have to stop.
9723283
The conflict is already here.
Just as well more ponies see him as an ally
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This entire story is a typo man.
Please continue
If you are kind of stuck, you can always finalize the timber wolf ark, and start another conflict. I don’t know, maybe something like: Other countries are interested in the beast of the everfree, or maybe he gets to meet the protectors of the ever free, maybe he kills a pony (guilty or not) he has a mayor problem of distrust with the ponies, maybe Celestia gets involve in a negative of positive way, maybe he meets Discord , and even Discord’s magic doesn’t work on him. All this are just random ideas so feel free to pick one of this ones or make your own. And If you feel this fics is more of a burden than anything else , just drop it.
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Adding to the other countries being interested you never did capitalize on the bad land butchers, considering that just about every nation had a pooled bounty on their asses and suddenly after I think 3 or so years the most saught after group of killers is slain. I'm very interested on how that one plays out with the leaders of the other nations since they'd polly want to meet the person that killed those minotaurs which would be very interesting to see as well as how the princesses will react once they hear that he killed them and collected the bounty
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Both you and Nmb have very good ideas and some of them may be in the works.
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Glad to be of help
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Can’t wait to see what’s next
I love you for this quote.
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If you've ever listened to Copperhead Road by Steve Earl, Hank's name might as well me John Lee Pettimore.
This line reminds me of the sniper from tf2
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Exactly.
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Im just waiting for that fancy sword he has to turn out to be some griffon or minotaur family heirloom and they want it back.
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just picturing you rolling your face over the keyboard for for 5 minutes then hitting post.
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That's what it feels like honestly. I write so much if this story exhausted that it all kinda melds together after a while.
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Well its still a pretty good typo of a story. At least in my opinion at 3 am on 6th reread.