Just think a year and some change ago things were business as usual, now though I can barely remember what it was like to not have fight everyday just to survive. Its been a long year and a hard winter hopefully I can get a break sometime soon.
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Like for Forg? (Frosh)
Like for Tod?? (Kröte)
Well this update came sooner than expected
I like frogs more because they have better colours.
The Everfree is about to meet the Indomitable Human Spirit. 😈
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Quality point.
Very well done with this chapter. The way you described the forest was quite chilling, and gives it that menacing fantasy feeling. The shorter chapters are good, and the detail is awesome. I am quite amped for the next one. Hopefully Hank gets to witness the full powers of dark and evil magic at work... and promptly blow it to hell!
I am curious though, will there be more Shuck variants? We've got regulars (Infantry), Breakers (Heavy hitters/armored), and Stalkers (Officers/assassins).
Can't wait for more!
They're gone, aren't they?
That all but confirms it.
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Perhaps perhapppppssssss
Frogs are nice, but toads go harder. Built in camo and all. Plus, they're usually bigger where I'm at.
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Solid reasoning.
I would be happy to point out editing issues, I just didn’t want to discourage you. I will be better in the future
A nice solid bit of carnage, frogman style. Loved the attention to weapon condition and water crossing/wading with a firearm. Not a lot of authors take the time to go into detail or care how weapons function in other than normal situations.
I hadn't thought about suppressors getting flooded when submerging before but it makes perfect sense know that I've thought more on it. The suppressor waterlogging detail will happen with virtually any suppressor too.
The more you know!
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Happy you liked the details. Those are the things I enjoy doing in my writing so it's good to know it's decent to read as well.
And yes about suppressors getting flooded. However many newer suppressors have better baffle designs and overall design characteristics that make operation in adverse circumstances like being full of water barely a consideration.
Nothing that the Hankomatic has is new, in any sense of the word, or in top shape. Lots of miles on all of his various kit. As such he needs to be a little more mindful.
I plan to continue with this style of detailing going forward so I hope that's something you can look forward to. Thanks for the comment.
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That the feel I was most certainly going for, good to see that I was able to translate that onto the 'page'.
As for shuck variants I can be honest when I say probably not. I enjoy creating new horrors to combat but I don't feel I could make another sub variant that felt like it "belonged" with the others per se. However if you feel like you have any pressing ideas DM me with em, even if I feel like they aren't a good fit lots of good detail can be gained through discussion. I'm always happy to see your comments below these chapters.
I personally prefer toads. When I was little we had a bad gnat problem and thinking outside the box, I caught a toad (which we named Hippity-Hop) and put her in a plastic box with a small log, some sunning rocks, and water, plus a piece of fruit. The gnats were not a problem for long. All we had to do was ensure the piece of fruit was near the toad and she did her job admirably. So I vote toads.
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Very good, always appreciate a personal toad anecdote.
Personally, toads for two reasons:
1. they look funny and kind of cute
2. they are wonderful fathers
(the story continues to be amazing, keep it up my good sir)
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lol. I don’t recall sending that at all. My phone was on audio play, in my pocket, and randomly had buttons pressed and …that selection got highlighted and sent. I don’t even know… sorry for the random and nonsensical comment.
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You good brah
In the begging of a new chapter you listed a various states of a mind the deeper they went to the forest. It actually reminded me of a game "Darkwood". A truly haunting thought crept into my mind the moment I remembered "Darkwood" and compared the game and this story : "What if the Everfree forest is alive and have it's own conscious?" Not in the sense of "all animals in the forest are connected and have something like a hivemind", but rather "the forest itself is alive and in the center of it is it's brain", hence why everyone is going insane the closer they're getting to the brain.
Also, if you saw "Pan's Labyrinth" - there was a giant toad. THAT is what I imagine a toad's queen would look like.
Frosh
As an Australian I despise particular toads, but all frogs are cool.
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only other potential i can see for a new shuck varient would be a super intelligent leader type with some kind of magical power. or actual psyonics or telepathy would be cool. or make it changeling-adjacent.