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Silver Inkwell


"Take me away to a dream and I will live like it was real, wake me up to reality and I'll live it like it was a dream."

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When you enter this door your very worst fears and nightmares are shown, but what if it actually does more than that too as well?

Note: This is VERY loosely based off of/ inspired by this music video.

Sombra's Door

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Before I read it, what is the Dark tag for ?
And how bad is it ?

May I make a suggestion? I highly recommend you get a good editor to scour through your stories. I don't mean getting a fan willing to take a look at your stories, either. You need to get someone who will tear your work to shreds.

You've got run on sentences, bad grammar, and poor sentence structure throughout the story. You attempt a profoundly deep ending only to leave readers wondering what they read. To top it all off, you throw in a question in the author's notes like you expect the comments section to explode into a philosophical discussion.

Do yourself a favor and take some time to focus on the quality of your work rather than pump out a lot of poorly executed stories.

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