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Head of Common Mockery


Heyo! I am the Head of Common Mockery. I write whatever ideas for fics I come up with.

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Have the Xenomorphs kill the Caribou and save the ponies then, I hope that all the Caribou get what is coming to them, a VERY painful death.

It that the same xenomorph from mortal kombat x?!

Gerald... Gerald.... GERALD!!!

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If you're reading this story expecting it to be one filled with heros and good endings, then I apologize for your misconception and would advise that discontinue reading. This series of unfortunate events will have nothing of the sort... This is not going to be a completely happy tale, but a series of unfortunate events.

no one deserves to be captured and used as a host for Xenomorphs. It's actually quite painful way to go having a chestburster bust through your rib cage. Also getting smothered with a face hugger ain't to fun neither, as if you try to remove them from your face, they will kill you in the process.

Yeah, not many Fall of Equestria crossovers get love considering it has Fall of Equestria involved. This is something I'm pretty sure many people joked about and mentioned once or twice but didn't want to actually use it thinking it will only be one of those crappy crossovers that don't go anywere or it might just be another "Blank saves Equestria" fanfic, but this first chapter actually shows that isn't the case as the Alien, or Xenomorph, are a danger to anyone and do not discriminate when hunting and killing and finding hosts, making this a perfect place for both CAribou and ponies to feel afraid for not the other but an unknown. I applaud you good sir in making just the first chapter readable, hope to see more.

I have to say, this is one of the few good Fall of Equestria fics I've read! Hope to see more

Just waiting for a caribou to yell "Game over, man!"

........ Nickelmane is best pony :rainbowkiss:

I caught that Arnold Schwarzenegger line from Predator. Oh shit is Predator gonna jump in this?

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Which line? I don't remember putting an Arnold reference in there.

8047394 The "what are you waiting for? do it kill me!" line if i'm not mistaken.

WAIT MY BAD i just reread it to make sure and it's not an arnold reference. Even though it's only two words from being one. My bad dude.

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Actually, I was trying to make a reference to what most things say when they have a chestburster inside them. And I have to say, making this is easier than I expected! I mean, FoE uses so many clichés, and Xenomorphs are deadly enough to make them overpower most things. And I'm having fun depicting how the new Caribou hybrid can kill it's prey!

Hey Head of Common Mockery,

would you mind if we added your story to Schorl Tourmaline's FoE fan group?

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Just know that my fic happens at the same time as the very beginning of FoE, and doesn't effect the entire empire. Only Canterlot.

pretty sure at this point the yutija would send an elite hunting party, possibly two or three, fun is fun but now these ahrd meat are becoming dangerous.

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There are no saviors, and Equestria is far beyond any known quadrants of space... At least in all of my fics it is.

Hope AJ Kills all the Xenomorphs and retakes Equestia from the Caribou.

So now there will be a xeno that has super powers and shit... Ain't that just dandy? Is that white xeno supposed to be from the new Alien movie?

well shit. That ended quickly...

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Some of us just want to watch the world burn!

I mean AJ could survive... with her body having the powers of superman, she could easily x-ray her body, heat vision a incision to remove the alien and use her heat vision to also burn the cut closed... The only problem she'd have to deal with after would be a xeno with some of the Superman's powers....so eh but twi just got straight fucked

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Now there's a Xeno with both wings and a horn... Those poor SOBs.

8202974 war is war but a extermination is worse

I'm guessing twilight is now xeno cool cool because I was waiting for something like this keep it up

Really wished you didn't kill off a lot of the mane 6 members, and this is another fall fic where I've seen Twilight meeting a terrible end. Hate seeing her buy it.

I know Kane has probably heard stories of the Demons, but you usually don't remember when you're impregnated by a facehugger because they release a drug as they insert the chestburster that makes you forget about the attack.
In Aliens 3, Ellen Ripley didn't know she was attacked by a Royal Facehugger until late in the movie.
As a better example, in Alien, Kane has no recollection of the facehugger attack when he's in the medical bay, and only finds out about the chestburster when it's too late.

Huh. This is something.

Damn when did it started to get weird...discord...

damn, it all crazy now....I knew applejack was strong but now she....OVER NINE THOUSAND...stronger

The most interesting chapter so far, good job.

Here's for a good Fall of Equestria story. Fall of Equestria: Hunt or be Hunted:

Similar to this story, but with the Yautja. Realizing Equestria stands no chance against the Caribou, Celestia pagers a distress signal to the Yautja, who once saved their world from the Xenomorphs. Now the Yautja counter invade Equestria but for Equestria to put an end to the Caribou. The Caribou have two choices against the warrior aliens: hunt or be hunted by them.

If we can take over Equestria, then these demons are nothing.

Don't on it Dainn. Even the Predators, which are stronger than Caribou, have struggled against the Xenomorphs. One Xenomorph is difficult for them to kill.

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The point of this story was to make a version of FoE where no one wins.

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I know. That's why I pointed out that the Predators, which are stronger than even Dainn is, have hard time against the Xenomorphs. The Caribou and Dainn were powerful enough to take down the Equestrians and most likely the rest of the world, the Predators are skilled warriors and hunters and could easily attack the Caribou and Dainn out of nowhere, and the Predators don't exactly have an easy time against the Xenomorphs. If the Xenomorphs can kill a Predator, then they are by far stronger than the Caribou and Dainn.

Is it okay if I use this story for inspiration where in an alternate universe the Predators come to Equestria's aid?

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If I allowed that, it would mess with an idea I have involving one member of the mane six who’s condition is currently unknown. An idea involving Fluttershy and a Predator who prefers to observe rather than hunt.

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Checking that out now, bye Xenomorph fuckers.

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Is there a link to that FoE: Hunt or be Hunted?

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