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The Monoceros

Hi, I became an MLP:FiM fan because of a traumatic event. I had decided to take advantage of the show's famous heartwarming moments as a means of helping my recovery. Then I just got hooked.


[Original Concept: Galactus Eats the Conversion Bureau]
Page Image: https://pk-artist.deviantart.com/art/Galactus-Reimagined-287466515 (EDIT: It seems that this image has been removed from Deviantart.)
During the final days of the Conversion War, a fed up Twilight Sparkle attempted to overthrow Queen Soleste, formerly known as Princess Celestia. She failed and, as punishment, was banished to the stars.

While there, a powerful entity discovered, freed, and remade her as his new herald.

Now, two years later, after Equestria had won the war, she has returned...

Wow, I never imagined that this would become one of the 09/13/2016 Popular Stories!

New Readers: I was basically writing this off the seat of my pants, as such I have compiled two different versions of the whole story as the final two chapters. The only difference between them is that the second-to-last chapter has filler content, while the last chapter does not. Please keep this in mind. Thank you.

I have recently cleaned up this story, thus removing almost all redundancies.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 27 )

Hmmm, interesting. I don't generally like, or bother with, Marvel Comics-related stuff, but this story has peaked my interest.

Have a Fave, a Track, and a Follow for it, and I can't wait to see what happens next!

ESPECIALLY once Twilight; er, Silent Dusk, excuse me!; gets back to 'Neo-Equestria', and confronts her former "friends" AND Queen Soleste with what's coming their way.

Should be good!

Oh, and I like her design at the end of this chapter. She looks kinda like a cross between herself and Nightmare Moon.

Well that was quick. I'm okay with this.

en espera de mas . idea interesante , :rainbowderp:
que depara el futuro para los ponys y humanos

7568487 I'm sorry, but I have no idea what you just said because I don't speak spanish.

Erias velam likes the idea and is waiting for more. There is also the question what future awaits the ponies and humans.

8171617 Actually,... that's something I completely forgot about! :facehoof: Well, that's one more thing to fix when I finish the Remastered chapter, thx. :twilightsheepish:

Discord knew the end was coming. P.S. You forgot Flutters, Dissy.

He didn't forget her, the Flutters he knew was long gone because of the Solar Tyrant.

This is cool but I'm confused on what is happening the parts seem more out of place then a puzzal


Fortunately, most Marvel guys don't like MLP either! And most of the upper echelon of Marvel's characters could bolo stomp FiM so hard it's hilarious!

I'm gonna keep this short, clean up this fic please. Chapters are repeated, extra stuff is unnecessary, this entire story feels like it was divided into bits and posted out of order.

1) It is all in order.
2) Did you even read my authors notes?
3) It took a while to write, so the so-called chopped up portions were actually posted as I came up with ideas.
4) The "repeated" chapters are the assembled pieces.
5) I did clean it up by posting the full story, both with and without filler, as a single one-shot chapter.
6) I didn't want to delete the piecemeal chapters b/c I didn't want to delete the chapter comments.

I re-read my earlier comment after your response and realized I sound like an absolute jackass, so first and foremost: I'm sorry if I did indeed sound like an idiot. No, I didn't actually read the ANs. I didn't realize the last chapter was the entire story with no filler, and I saw repeated stuff. It irks me when I see copy pasted chapters. Carry on I guess.

Sidenote: I'm not a people person and it took me 20 minutes to type a response I didn't cringe at and backspace completely.

That's alright. In fact, your comment inspired me to put a note in the description just for people like you so they'd understand.

I also decided to clean it up a little anyway.

(looks at picture) Since when does Galactus look like that?

I found it on deviantart, click on the image, there is a link.

Comment posted by ToMahkAros deleted Jan 17th, 2018


in all fairness discord probably hates fluttershy for taking the humans world and erasing them sense this is a conversion bureau story

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