• Member Since 8th Aug, 2011
  • offline last seen Nov 10th, 2019

huntersunday


I read, I stalk, I Write, and one day one of my stories will be featured. That is all

Comments ( 16 )

I'll have to keep my eye on this!

The concept is good, but the constant spelling and grammatical errors are very jarring. You might consider a proofreader.

7811516 I have tried I think because of the holidays there isn't a lot of people on

just letting you know I have someone finally on it.
7811516

Watching this with very great interest.

7842321 I like the set up, the consensual nature of it and how you wrote it. Well done.

Where is the next chapter o,o

I''m kidding, wonderful job :)

7936189 it's coming life has been getting in way

Ok man that was a twist at the end. Honestly expected r to scream Apple Jack's name but Rarity wow!!

I'm really enjoying this. I am waiting anxiously for the next chapter.:pinkiehappy: :rainbowlaugh:

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