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Well this is a massive improvement over you other stories, your characters are much better flushed out and the story follows much more smoothly. did you get permission from the original author? for the story itself would have wished to know what sort of mind tempering Sombra did to Shining Armor to make him so complaint to him will.
7803453 Yes I did get permission and I linked the original story which explains how Shining was broken
Err, where's the futa with male part? D:
or the futa part at all... It's not even mentioned in the description or anything but you added it to the futa with male group o.O
Only saw the M/M(/M) parts.
7811508 The three way part with Shining, Sombra, and Mac (futa means fucked up the ass right? that's what urban dictionary told me) I wasn't even aware futa was a thing until after I posted this and assumed it qualified, I was debating putting it in but now I'm taking it out
7811508 I took it out of the group
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Well, gotta say, that's the weirdest way I've ever been let down.
7813917 Not sure how to respond to that honestly...
7814678 Lol, was just trying to be funny about it.
7815480 Well what did you think about it in its own right?
7815638 I really didn't read it >~>
I just skipped through looking for a part where I ran into something like "Cadance's/Twilight's cock" or whatever.
My opinion really doesn't matter since I can't say anything critical about it. Any real "criticism" I could state boils down to "I don't like x" (Mainly mind break/control and cuckoldry in this case)
Sorry man :T
7815752 A little upsetting because out of all 37 people who disliked it nobody said anything.... And even negative comments excite me because they start conversations