A diapered competition

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Glamer Mist

Glamer Mist #1 · Jun 2nd, 2017 · · · 2. The contract ·

Was there any reason that had to be two chapters?

Tacs Repaid

Tacs Repaid #2 · Jun 2nd, 2017 · · · 2. The contract ·

8205826 I'm just writing when I have the chance, plus I wanted to publish the story before adding new chapters so the first two are a little brief.
Don't worry though, the next chapters should be longer.

GetLucky

GetLucky #3 · Jun 4th, 2017 · · · 3. Baby steps ·

Your story's pretty good so far! I only really noticed one or two grammatical errors, so that's fine. The only criticism I have is that the character's voices seem kind of generic, you know? By that I mean the dialogue feels like something a background character might be saying rather than Celestia or Luna. I wouldn't say that'd require you to constantly have Luna speak in the Ye Olde Canterlot accent or whatever, but maybe just throw in a bit of their flair to make them feel more like the actual characters. Other than that, I really like what you have so far! I really look forward to the rest of the story, and of course, just ignore the downvoters who just dislike because of the fetish content. I'm sure that if they really had criticism past that, they'd actually comment about it.

The Killer Legacy

The Killer Legacy #4 · Jun 4th, 2017 · · · 3. Baby steps ·

I have to ask something, the "scat" tag means that in future chapters will have "these contents" out of the diapers or it will just stay in the diapers? Because if second choice, the tag could easily be just "diaper usage".

Also, the nexts chapters will take so long to release? xD

Tacs Repaid

Tacs Repaid #5 · Jun 4th, 2017 · · · 3. Baby steps ·

8210859 I was planning to do two versions of the final scene, one contained and one outside.
Don't worry, the next chapter should come out in the next few days. I just spend today working on my other story.

The Killer Legacy

The Killer Legacy #6 · Jun 4th, 2017 · · · 3. Baby steps ·

8210943

There is one canon chapter between these two?

Also, how many chapters do you plan to do? Do you plan to extend the story with lot of chapters or just a few more? Because I would like so much more chapters! ^^ You certainly could make the story long, like you did with the introduction and the contract, like, it could have chapters where they could play with babyish things while they wait for the "inevitable", after all, they want to know who is the more babyish :p

It's just a suggestion by the way, if you already have the complete story in your mind, it's ok tho.

Comment posted by imanobody deleted Jun 19th, 2017

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