By the Emperor's grace, we shall persevere. FOR THE EMPEROR! SLAY THE WITCH! BURN THE HERETIC! And give hugs to any small equine you may find in your path.
I am a Displaced, sent here by the loathed Merchant. But something happened that doesn't normally happen in a Displaced. Say hi Martellus...
Greetings, I am Techmarine Martellus of the Blood Ravens 3rd company.
So now Martellus and I are stuck in Equestria with only my little sisters brony knowledge that she babbled at me to help us survive. I guess being a Space Marine doesn't hurt either...
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I like how this has started
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Thank you!
8060869 Guardsman Richard Wild, reporting in, SIR!
*insert a Cadian shock trooper wearing carapace armor and a battle scarred helmet and carrying a Kantrael pattern lasgun and equipped with the basic kit that all troopers carry*
pony pic time!!!
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That's one Doome- Huh? Wrong reference again!? This cannot keep happening...
Those who like this story, I have decided to grace you with another chapter!
8154365 thank you. So that's where the chainsaw sword is from. Changelings as cannon fodder good choice.
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Thank you for commenting!
FOR EVERYONE CONCERNED NO THIS STORY IS NOT DEAD! IN FACT IT HAS JUST BEEN RE-ACTIVATED WITH THE COMING SCHOOL YEAR! AS HAVE MY OTHER STORY! WORRY NOT! THE SECOND CHAPTER IS ALREADY IN PROGRESS! FOR THE EMPEROR!
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So.... will it be soon? Or are you like me and just get distracted by every single thing
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I am working on it as we speak, but honestly, I am just typing till I decide its done, that way its a bit higher quality than if I had a word count limit, so... maybe?
How do you feel about Orks?
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Love em bro! That's why an Ork teleported Marcellus here rather than the usual random Chaos Sorcerer. Why do you ask?
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No reason >.> *hides Ork Truck behind a tree*
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*Warhound Titan slowly leans into view nearby with Usarker E. Creed atop it.*
What you're doing in the comments is expressly banned from the site.
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It was like for 2 seconds. Plus we stopped about 2 weeks ago. Don't worry! It's fine! It's fine! Everything is fine!
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ITS FINALLY UP EVERYONE! CHAPTER 2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! LETS GO!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Gawd that took too long....)
Woot woot! Okay, so every now and then there are small grammatical errors, but you know...small. Not even a big problem.
Uh...You know I really, REALLY like where this is going. I'm having fun and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Yeah.... I see some possible property damage in the next chapter
.... Did... did you just make a Soviet Womble Alien Isolation Reference in that? The “It’s Fine, it’s fine. Everything is fine!” Bit?
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Yes! Yes I did!
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Yep. There will be lots of property damage. But can you expect anything less with something from 40K of all places? And a Space Marine at that? I feel like people who write displaced Space Marine stories don't really touch enough on the whole 'Giant superhuman having no idea how to interact with things barely a quarter of his size.' SO I added it in here!
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I am glad you liked the story. Seriously, it makes me happy you like it. But if you would, can you point them out so I can fix it?
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It's to be expected.
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Yeah sure, I'll see what I can do. (I live in Mexico so places with good wifi are too far and few apart.)
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Thank you so much! I truly appreciate you!
In the Grim Darkness of the second mellenium another is displaced.
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Aye. A Techmarine this time though!
Is it dead?
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On the contrary, it is still alive and well, but it is taking me time to type the next Chapter and of course I needed time to get the first chapter of my other story, The Equestrian Crusade, up and running.
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Oh ok, I think ya already know why I asked if this story was dead.
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I'm gonna admit, I was confused by your comment.
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Too many authors leave their stories to rot without update or simply cancel good stories, that's why I asked
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Ah. Makes sense. I intend to see this through. And if I cant finish it, I will give it to someone else.
It lives! :D
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My apologies for being gone so long. But I made a promise that this story wont die. SO IT SHALL NOT!!!
PRASE BE THE EMPEROR
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*insert doctor Frankensteins famous scene here*
Ouch. The reality of this predicament really shows with Martellus, and I like it. Nice chapter.
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Thank you, I really tried to picture that here in this Chapter and I am glad that it worked out as intended.
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INDEED HONOURABLE BATTLE BROTHER!
it lives! the emperor be prased! but really now.. I enjoyed this chapter and it was worth the wait~
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Me too my friend. There is a reason I fell offline for a while (no it wasnt writers block) that I may share at one point, but currently I will not be sharing it. I am planning on making a new Chapter here before I post the other story I just put in the Creative Oven. No hints there.
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I am quite glad you like it! Though it really didn't take this long to make it. It was almost done for a while. But something came up before I could post it. I am glad there is an overwhelmingly positive response to this new chapter! I will make another Chapter before I begin work on another Project I have planned. In the meantime, PRAISE BE TO THE EMPEROR OF MANKIND!
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and prase be to the Omnisiah!
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PRAISE BE TO THE MACHINE GOD!!!
Finally another chapter, so good, do do so good, do do do do.
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I am honestly very glad you like it! Thanks for the comment!
well that depends, did he have his helmet on? Because they have photolenses in their helmet, switch means that when bright light hits it lenses will dim sou effect would not be as bad.
could have been worse, it could have been cherub.
Did you just out ork the orks?
Just imagine going to equestria with powers over techpriests like in mechanicus it would be amazing.
Btw I love this story please keep going. FOR THE GOD EMPEROR!