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Silentwoodfire

Former furre moving to MUCH better things.

Silentwoodfire Joined 19th Feb, 2014 · Offline

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Firesight
Firesight #1 · Nov 23rd, 2016 · · ·
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Fun little story! :eeyup: Was a pleasure to edit. I like how the question is left open of whether this was just a nightmare or something more was happening and this 'evaluation' was somehow real.

Kikio3000
Kikio3000 #2 · Nov 24th, 2016 · · ·
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Cool! I haven't read this yet, is this story like the official comic?

Silentwoodfire
Silentwoodfire #3 · Nov 24th, 2016 · · ·
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7744376

I wouldn't know, I haven't gotten that far along yet

eraser
eraser #5 · Dec 3rd, 2016 · · ·
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The joke is predictable, but still was handled well. The build-up for the joke was boring, though. The story might benefit from being twice shorter.

AJ Aficionado
AJ Aficionado #6 · May 5th, 2018 · · ·
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With that out of the way, he snuggles up under his sheets, claps off his firefly lantern and closes his eyes, allowing his body to settle and mind to wander as his dreams start to form.

I feel old...

As he moved along he noticed something different off in the distance, a door made out of some sort of metal and a button in a inlaid panel

*an* inlaid panel.

The thought made him chuckle as he summons some ballerina buffalo

You time traveled, mate. It's *summoned*.

Luna Nocturn, Princess of the Night and Keeper of Dreams

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petitioners for redress of various grievances

And take the -10 hit to prestige? [selects deny and kills the peasant uprising. gaining 10 loyalty from the Nobles faction in the process.]

In any event, Discord of all beings would hardly need her help, so sensing a distressed foal experiencing a vivid nightmare,

School Daze. :pinkiesick:

With another soft ‘ding!’ the draconequus is subtly shut into the elevator before he feels the sensation of moving for several moments as a catchy tune plays over the small speaker in the ceiling, making him make a mental note to magically change all elevator music in Equestria to something more… stimulating as a prank the next day.

That's taken care of.

“I had a nightmare…”

Glad I could help with your story, though as I recall I didn't have much in the way of advice. Hope to see you write again someday! :twilightsmile:

TheScottishbroneyforlife
TheScottishbroneyforlife #7 · Mar 22nd, 2021 · · ·
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Excellent story keep up the good work.
Ps just to let you know I'm a fanfic critic and I help fanfic witers who have witers black.
Are you looking for your next story idear

Silentwoodfire
Silentwoodfire #8 · Mar 24th, 2021 · · ·
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Thank-you for your thoughts. Regarding other stories, I have one percolating slowly (and a list of prompts otherwise), I have just been very busy with work so my time has been limited

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