• Member Since 24th Mar, 2014
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Shamrock95


Not much to say about myself -- I'm an Irish guy whose interests include MLP, video games, and occasionally writing fanfics.

Comments ( 25 )

That's it! I'm (totally not) tired of these motherbucking trouser snakes on this motherbucking train!

7736417 I'm about to open some buckin' windows.

Shiny's got back for days~!

The short synopsis says they're going to Las Pegasus, as opposed to Neighcaragua.

7736634 Ah shit, I'll fix that. Thanks.

I'm... I'm sorry. I just had to. The chapter title made me. I'll just let myself out.:ajsleepy:

7736781 Yeah, you'd better keep walking... (grumble grumble)

7736783 Thank you!

7736804 I know, this is a mature story, I should've used the Rated-R version.:fluttershyouch:

Shining's isn't your average every day softness. This is......Advanced softness.

What is with all the dislikes? Why is everybody hating?

Um... A bit of misleading advertising in your story synopsis. You said there would be "descriptions of cum inflation," but it was more of a passing mention than a description.

It's your story, so you don't need to include multiple paragraphs waxing lyrical about bellies swollen with cum, if you don't want to. But, man, don't get a guy's hopes up like that. At the very least, "descriptions of [fetish]" implies that there's more than a single sentence about [fetish].

Flash blinked, not sure if he'd heard right. "Come again?"

Shining smirked as he replied, "Don't mind if I do!"

7737210 Gay stuff? Fat stuff? Flash Sentry? All of the above?

7737564 Sorry about that, but I'm erring on the side of caution here. I've seen readers flip their lids over far less than that.

So, it said he broke the 500 mark so is he 500 on the dot or a little over?

7739321 I'd say he's about 505.

7737840 Fair enough. After all, you can't please everyone.

I think it was a great story, and I am happy that you managed to write an other great story again with those two.

7740977 Thanks, glad you enjoyed it. :twilightsmile:

Neighcaragua, hahaha, good one... I like the story already and didn't even read it yet.
Ever hear the song?
It's an older one, I think done by Kay Kyser.... maybe.

7762983 I don't think I have, no.

Imagine Shining being such a fatass his rolls jiggle for 5 straight bucking minutes (or longer) after he stops moving.

I might be vastly wrong, but jowls sound like they'd detract from Shiny's attractiveness.

8228722 But just imagine the flubba-dubba sound they'd make when you gave his cheeks a wobble!

8229464
.....Go on. :derpytongue2:

I miss fat Shining.

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