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Bronycommander


A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"

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Johann Bauer, a Luftwaffe Trooper of Germany and his wife want to be parents but his wife is barren. On 15th October, when a terrorist attack was executed, Johann finds a unicorn filly. Can he protect her from Deathshead and terrorists to live his dream with his wife, or will he fail to be a father? Takes place in the Wyatt timeline

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Comments ( 79 )

What is the Wyatt timeline?

7575697 in the First Level of the game, you have to decide between wyatt and another soldier who should survive
The timeline is named after the soldier who survived

I like the twinkle twinkle little star song. I just know that version from Dead Space, but I'm not sure if that one had a third verse. Anyway good job I am enjoying it so far. Could use some spacing between dialogue and text but I don't mind it that much. I particularly like that you are giving the Nazis a redeeming qualities and not a homicidal maniacs everybody else would. Great work I'm impressed at least with the concept hmm :)

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I know this song from dead space too and not all Germans were believing in the regime which i tried to show here and in my other Wolfenstein Story "A Ghost in need"
Anyway glad you like it and i hope you enjoy it
You should read A ghost in need too (If you want)

J my friend.... Peace Love and freedom man:applecry:

7671280 me too, your selfdrawn picture looks very good (ocelot gesture) if you want to do some fanart do it, I could need a cover for it. A picture of altered dinky would look interesting.

And you must admit they did made deathsheads personality and Dialoge very good,didn't they?

Interestingly enough, the Heer, the Kriegsmarine and the Luftwaffe all hated the Gestapo and the SS. They considered them to be arse-kissing cowards who became heroes through torturing prisoners and slaughtering citizens.
They weren't far wrong.

“Yes, I like her eyes.”

Yeah, a bright yellow. Just like yours. You mad cow. :twilightangry2:
Yellow Eyes of the Sith

7834795 Indeed. I did write it to show excactly that. That not all Germans believed in the Third Reich. I hope you like the music from the game this fic is based on:twilightsmile:

7834804 Everything is prociding as i have forseen.

7599519 Yeah, I got a manga book from Finland that takes place during the Winter War. Outside of the main story, there are some German soldiers stuck in Finland being hunted by some very scary Soviets and, while some their leaders are blatantly insane, most of the average soldiers are little more than scared young men who really want to get out of the war.
We can't judge an entire nation based on the actions of their leaders.

7834814 AS FAST AS YOUR LEGS CAN CARRY YOU

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That's some free range truth there:twilightsmile: that's why I like this author he shows not everyone was fanatical about there actions as the game portrays. Now not going to lie I love running around screaming " die Nazi die!" But I know for a fact not everyone is evil monster. Thanks bronycommander I forgot how I used to comment:twilightsheepish:

Why any Regime thinks they can keep order with a name like Deathshead is beyond me! :facehoof::facehoof::facehoof:

7842363 Because they're believe in it.

“Sorry. It’s just; I am not used to something like this.”

Understatement of the century!

I dunno'. Frau Engel sure folded quickly. :unsuresweetie:
Villain like her, a dissenting soldier will likely send her flying into a rage.

7844617 She feels guilty as she realized what a good example of Parents Nina and Johann would make

Ah, a happy ending.
You don't see that every day in a WWII setting.
I'm so glad Dinky made it back home.
For both her and her family's sake, she couldn't be separated from them.

I suppose shell-shocked soldiers could do with a few days in Ponyville for some R&R.

Very well done, Bronycommander. I've enjoyed this, overall.

Thank every god that may or may not exist.
Dinky's gonna be alright! :yay::yay::yay:
A little bit quick for them to accept the arrival of Celestia and the Whooves family but I suppose anything's possible in the world of Wolfenstein.
Interestingly enough, the Cybermen were an allegory for communism.
"All shall be equal in skin of steel. One mind, one body, humanity...upgraded" Pretty much what they say at some point.
Daleks, meanwhile, represent fascism.
Both groups are fond of the word 'Exterminate'.

no offense, but it sounds like Johann is trying to Keep Dinky To Himself

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Can you Blame him, he and his Wife just want to be parents.

I am no Nazi that's also why I use almost no words that were used back then.

aint THAT obvious? I'm no Nazi either, infact, i was PART Of The Assassination Attempt On Hitler. BURN HITLER!

Nina called out. She made herself and her husband Potato Soup and for Dinky hot chocolate and fish sticks

ok, no offense, but PLEASE change that, Fish Sticks are made of Fish Which are Made Of MEAT!

Go get her Tiger.”

yep, that's a DEAD T-34

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It was Never clear if rommel was Really Part of it.

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No, as fish is eaten by vegetarians

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He admitted it, and was then told that either he could resist, and have Him AND His Family Killed By Hitler, OR He could kill himself WITHOUT loosing his Family

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Yet it was never really proven. But enough political and historical talk, enjoy the story.

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listen
Political Stuff = Trump and all that stuff

Historical Conversation = FUN4ALL!!

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Agreed. Enjoy the story and if you want to know how a character looks like (For example Johann's uniform) you can look in the wiki I linked in the first chapter, or I send you a PM with pictures.

You can ask me everything Dinky

Dinky: alright, When will the World End?
Johann: ...

8234923 That was Kurt, not Johann. As I said, if you want to know how someone looks like, (like Johann's inform) you can check the wiki I linked on the first chapter or I sent you a Pm with pictures if you want

A Panzerhund? Must be some sort of Robot Controlled Tank

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YEs, it is a robot, if you want to know more, i can tell you in a PM or you can check the linked wiki

NO DINKY NOOOO!! ITS BETTER TO STAY WITH THEM! AND ITS DANGEROUS OUTSIDE!

“And here is a lollipop for you.”

Lollipops in the Ger-Mane Military? Another reason to move to Ger-Mane-Neigh

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yeah, but they're actually Lutscher which translates to Lollipop

Chapter 10 Take your filly to work

if you take your filly to school
if you give your filly a cookie
if you build your a tree house
etc.

Dinky saw a car driving by. Two Commandos of Deathshead stepped out and walked to the Front door.

Hops into a Ju 87 R-2, flys overhead and drops its SC1000 Bomb On deathshead

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