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Bronycommander


A German who likes history, and WW2 technology but not war. "Within the darkness there is light and hope"

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This story is a sequel to Black Bloom


It's been two months after Black Mesa. Still, Apple Bloom has problems getting over it. One night, she has a nightmare and meets Jacob and Mia again, only to find out how things have changed on earth. Can they protect her from the new dangers and get her home?

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 33 )
Comment posted by Bronycommander deleted Oct 15th, 2016

7643796 You got that right. I hope I didn't scare you with the screan of the fast zombie. The music is very fitting for Ravenholm, don't you agree?

7643796 Konrad is my character.

hahahahahahaha i called it a chapter ago knoew it was konrad

The data consists of portal tecnology and they build one to go to equestria

7669771 about the technology,you got that right. In Episode 2,the destruction of the citadel created a Portal storm to bring reinforcements to stop the resistance. The combine called all remaining troops on earth to stop the resistance from closing it.

That gives me an idea. You could use your idea for or collab story,what do you think?

Or did you mean the resistance who tries to build it?

7670155 sorry if I confused you, as you said they,i coudn't figure out if you meant the resistance or the combine. So which one did you mean? And that idea with the portal would be good for the collab.

Hope you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoy my new stoty and my 3 others too. Looking forward your comments!

7670176 the resistance but it could be combine data that gives them equestrias dimenshinal locathion

Hey, thats pretty good!:pinkiehappy:

He Dr played Half-Life but I've seen playthroughs of it and it looks cool I hope to get it.

8024000 glad to hear it. Hope you like the joke i putted in one of the chapters and eager if you can solve the reference with the number made for you:twilightsmile:

Well, that was a fun ride; kinda makes me wish that the game didn't have to be leaked...

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Yeah. Due the fact that episode 2 ends with a cliffhanger, I ended this story with episode 1, couldn't figure out how I could end the story with episode 2. Glad to hear you liked it, any scene in perticular you liked?

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Probably, Barney being gangster. Of course, Valve is taking precious time to count their money; then again, I could consider getting ahold of the game now that I have an original Xbox, courtesy of a former customer from several years ago. What's your take...?

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Well, if Half life 3/Episide 3 ever comes out when I'm still alive, I would buy it to see how Half life ends. Hope you like the first one as well.

So my question is,
When will I get featured?

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Also, will there be a Black Bloom 3?

"She felt save with them. But this was only the beginning."
Save should be safe.

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Will there be an ending to this then?

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Well given the Thing of Episode 2', i ended it with Episode 1

A happy ending! Hell yeah. A good conclusion to a good series.

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