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Pennington Inkwell


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This story is a sequel to Brothers


What do you do when an insane, homicidal maniac with godlike powers descends upon your life with the sole intent of ending it?

What do you do when you were the one responsible for the aforementioned sadist's creation?

It has been almost a year since the events of "Brothers," and Eclipse Tumult has finally adjusted to life in Equestria. Being Discord's weaker brother hasn't done him any favors, but he has finally begun to come out of his shell, even taking on a student of his own and adopting a role with the Princesses who took him in. Life seems to have finally turned around for Eclipse, and it can only get better from here.

At least, that was was they thought until Eris, an ancient evil of his past with Discord, returns to Equestria, bent on destroying the entire civilization for her own amusement, starting at its heart: the Canterlot Royalty.

The fate of Equestria lies in the hooves of the Princesses, Eclipse, and their faithful students as they fight their greatest enemy yet. Can they survive, or will chaos prevail?


*This story is actually a sequel to several my other stories, "Brothers," "Whipstitch," and "Penn and Stone: Dynamic Duo." However, every character will be explained in a manner allowing the reader to read this story without that background. HOWEVER, I strongly recommend reading them beforehand.

ALL the art for this story has been drawn by Gina, from I AM PONY, my magnificent illustrator, partner, and friend.*

Chapters (8)
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Welcome back with renewed/reedited chapter!

Oof!
An auspicious start.

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Let's hope to see Eris gets what she deserves at some point.

:raritywink: i wont tell

any way, good chapter with much needed eclipse and even discord, a bit low on eris but i do hope to see more of her in the future.

while being a very emotional chapter (bit too much for my taste) still it showed a lot on how eclipse, luna and celestia interact on an emotional level, even discord with your writing style show more then he tells.

will wait for more chapters to come

"You mean... you're going to do anything? No attacks? No warping Equestria?" Celestia found herself suspicious of his words.

Um, "not do anything" or "do nothing".

Just sayin...

PC

It's Discord's fault... I hate him from now on! :twilightangry2::flutterrage:

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Don't worry...

It gets worse.

If you were to read back through my old blog posts, I've given a few previews of this story, I think.

PC

Nice. I'm done with all of your stories so far! :pinkiehappy: Wait... I'm done? :fluttercry::raritycry:

dangling his goat's hoof and rabbit's foot

Doesn't Eclipse have a lizard's leg, not a goat's?

3411295 Nope! It's one of the key differences between the twin draconequui.

I'm sorry! I'll try to write faster so you have more to read!!!

PC

3411338 What I was trying to say was that you wrote that Eclipse had a rabbit's and a goat's leg, but before you wrote that he had a rabbit's and lizard's leg, it's like that in the pictures of him, too. Discord has got a lizard's and goat's leg, while Eclipse has got a lizard's and rabbit's leg, right?

Oh and you don't have to trouble yourself writing faster. Quality is better than speed, and I do have another story that I need to read, so don't overexert yourself or something like that, it's not good!

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PC

I... I don't really know what to say about this chapter... It's... I don't know... It is something...

Well, Chrysalis was the one being I hated more than almost anything else, but now... I think I hate Eris even more. :flutterrage::twilightangry2:

So, this chapter certainly is... something... I don't know what, but it is something...

4005323 Trust me, you may hate Chrysalis, but she did what she did for a reason. She was trying to support her hive. If anything, she was simply ruthless and manipulative in her means, but to an end that could be seen as "good" from certain perspectives. For Chrysalis, the ends justified the means.

Eris just does it for the lulz.

If I do my job right, you'll learn to hate her much more than you ever hated Chrysalis.

PC

4058516 I'm back to hating Chrysalis more than Eris now, because in my mind Eris paid for all her sins (for now...). I just imagined Eris experiencing everything she ever did or wanted to do to everyone for eternity, including not just physical pain, but emotional too. Every time she got used to it, I increased the pain tenfold. Then I imagined myself giving her a break from the pain, then taking that break away from her, bringing back the pain, only now increased hundredfold. Yeah, I'm sometimes a sick, sadistic, morbid bastard (but only if I have a good reason). :pinkiecrazy:

4060892 Hehehe, something tells me you and I are quite alike, Pandora. :raritywink::pinkiecrazy:

PC

4078356 Hehe, great minds think alike. :raritywink:



P.S. I prefer being called PC... if that's okay.

PC

Sh-she... Howe ddare sghe... :twilightangry2::flutterrage: (Sorry for the bad typing, I'm shaking with rage, literally, and I almost broke my tablet. :derpyderp2:)

I'm okay, I'm fine, everything is fine, just breathe...

Well, Pennington Inkwell, I can't say you didn't warn me...

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(Now I think that punishment I gave her in my mind wasn't enough... :twilightangry2:)

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There is a VERY good reason Eris is one of my all-time favorite characters I've ever written... :pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy::pinkiecrazy:

And no, she doesn't get ANY better with time. :trollestia::trollestia:
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And so, Eris joins the hall of great villains present in my mind. Not the top (bottom?) spot, mind you. She'll have to do far worse to replace... brain fart. I can't remember who has that position. :facehoof:

4078470 Well, that's the first indication I have that I have a great mind.

4058516 PS, way late Idea for your H&H day special. Eris and Spike :pinkiehappy:

PC

4081655 If Eris isn't in the top (bottom?) spot, then who is?

I'm looking at this wall of deleted comments and i just cant stop starring and wondering what in the world they were about...

4093399 Unfortunately, I have a bad habit of feeding trolls. (I guess I'm just too trusting and take them all seriously.) So, I imposed a new policy. If, at the end of our conversation, the person outright states that they are here for the purpose of being a jerk, I delete the entire conversation, both their parts and mine (trying to remain impartial). G-AB Acid referred to himself as a "pedantic, internet ***hole" and Eclipse LunarSol said that he was merely here for the purpose of trolling and trying to make me enraged.

I wish that Fimfiction would get rid of that pesky notification of every deleted comment, but it DOES stop authors from simply editing their comments to look good without consequences, so it's a necessary inconvenience. :scootangel:

To Awnser the descriptions question I eat toast

Is this story going to be updated?

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