Ponies of Flight and Magic: League of Nightmares

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Comickook

Comickook #1 · Sep 20th, 2023 · 1 · · For Queen and Country ·

Again, this was a really well done chapter/start to this side of the story. Definitely appreciated the dialogue, characterizations, action and future chapter set-up. Very much liked Moonlight's reflections on the circumstances pitting her and Sunshine against each other as well as that bit of fear of Rarity. Definitely loved the dungeon chat between Moonlight and Sunshine and Moonlight helping Sunshine fake her death so the latter could escape and get back to Celestia.

VERY much looking forward to more of this (as well as, on another note, just which one of the three remaining spider-heroes [Rarity, Fluttershy or Pinkie] before Sunset is going to be featured in Chapter Four of "Spider Seven"):

(If it's Pinkie who's the next spider-hero): Loving the Night Life [given her costume basis on Spider-Man Noir]

If it's Rarity: Stylish AND Functional [given her costume basis on the Iron Spider]

or if it's Fluttershy: Feeling Invisible [given her canon personality AND the fact she presumably has the powers of the Miles Morales Spider-Man - including the super-camouflage power]).

SlyBesker