My name is Twilight Sparkle, I'm a student at Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns. I love to learn all I can about magic. And I certainly didn't hear a voice just now.
Caught between zealots promising death without mercy, and thirsting gods promising salvation for servitude, the Mane 6 make a choice... a choice that changes everything.
As Callum and the Mane Six continue their quest to find the shards of the Titans' Orb, the path ahead grows only more deadly, as they are now stalked by a relentless shadow that will stop at nothing to hunt them down...
Callum lives a miserable life on Earth, devoid of colour and hope, but his life is soon to change forever, at the arrival of six very unexpected visitors.
It can be hard, watching as those you love die around you. But Twilight's okay; like Celestia says, as long as she remembers them, they'll be with her. And she's very good at remembering, so they'll always be with her.
I cannot, in good conscience, favorite this. However, I'm more than happy to upvote it for the things it does, and the effectiveness with which it does them.
"I can handle this, it's nobody else's problem..."
(Is it in any groups yet? I can't tell if it's not, or it's just not showing them.)
I completely forgot to respond! I'm such a bad friend.
On the right hand side of the screen on the main story page (not one of the chapter pages) and below the suggested stories (Also Liked, Similar, and Author) there will be a listing of the groups that a story has been put into. Yours isn't in any, as far as I can tell.
What you need to do is click on the "Add To Group" button on the lower right corner of the story cover (is between the Statistics button and Report This Story button). From there, a list of the groups you're in will pop up and you can add it to groups and their folders as appropriate. Doing so will make your story pop up on the feeds of anyone in the those groups.
(Pro tip: I'd suggest adding to only a couple at a time, spaced out over hours or days, rather than all at once. If people are going to skip over the story, it doesn't matter how big a chunk of their feed it takes up. But if it pops up several times, you should A, reach new people, and B, maybe convince someone to give it a chance because it's "good enough to keep coming back." Sneaky, I know...)
She slammed the door shut and picked up an apple from the bowl standing next to it. She took a plate from a cupboard and a small knife from a drawer. The knife was high-grade, the handle made from burl wood and the blade showing a beautiful pattern.
Wow, your detailing that knife a bit to much......its suspicious.
For a long while, her gaze rested on it. Then she set her jaw stubbornly, sat up, and grasped the knife with her magic.
i just say this is dark
Cause i was in the same Position
but i choose to be Alice
Have I been here before? Don't know. Anyhow, reading this story feels like I went back in time. Strange.
What? I follow you yesterday, and today you immediately churn out what could be your first story?? Impressive!
This was a good fic. A bit interesting to see someone else's take on soul crushing depression.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
0:22_28/8/2016
I cannot, in good conscience, favorite this. However, I'm more than happy to upvote it for the things it does, and the effectiveness with which it does them.
"I can handle this, it's nobody else's problem..."
(Is it in any groups yet? I can't tell if it's not, or it's just not showing them.)
7536039 Not really sure how that's supposed to work tbh. I've set the "Feature Groups By Default" option, but I don't know if it's doing anything
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I completely forgot to respond! I'm such a bad friend.
On the right hand side of the screen on the main story page (not one of the chapter pages) and below the suggested stories (Also Liked, Similar, and Author) there will be a listing of the groups that a story has been put into. Yours isn't in any, as far as I can tell.
What you need to do is click on the "Add To Group" button on the lower right corner of the story cover (is between the Statistics button and Report This Story button). From there, a list of the groups you're in will pop up and you can add it to groups and their folders as appropriate. Doing so will make your story pop up on the feeds of anyone in the those groups.
(Pro tip: I'd suggest adding to only a couple at a time, spaced out over hours or days, rather than all at once. If people are going to skip over the story, it doesn't matter how big a chunk of their feed it takes up. But if it pops up several times, you should A, reach new people, and B, maybe convince someone to give it a chance because it's "good enough to keep coming back." Sneaky, I know...)
I just happen to notice the fic reads incomplete so I shall await a new chapter.With baited breath.
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how's that waiting holding up
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Not great. Still waiting. Roughly 2 1/2 years and going. I hope if someone else continues it someone will tell me.
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Your wait is over, friend.
第一次读到您的故事时,我正处于和您故事中的Twilight同样的境地,或者更糟。在当时,这篇故事完美地让我哭出来了。而现在,这篇故事一直给我动力活下去。
感谢您创作了这篇故事,也希望所有看到这条评论的人都能拥抱幸福。
Wow, your detailing that knife a bit to much......its suspicious.
Ya we all know what she is gonna do, don't we?