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Shamrock95


Not much to say about myself -- I'm an Irish guy whose interests include MLP, video games, and occasionally writing fanfics.

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This story is a sequel to My (Extra) Big Brother Best Friend Forever


Meeting Shining Armour and seeing how fat he's become has perplexed Twilight. Even more perplexing is how he can find it enjoyable. How can this be? Well, Twilight intends to find out, through the power of science!

Contains: Fat ponies, weight gain, overeating.

Done as part of a trade with TeenWolf952 on dA.

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Good story! It was pretty funny seeing how Twilight managed to walk around being fat! :rainbowlaugh: Although what would make this story more better is if Twilight went through more conflicts. Maybe a few in publicity? It would be really funny seeing her manage that on for a week! :rainbowlaugh: Anyways, have an upvote! :twilightsmile:

7424088 Thanks very much!

The only fun thing about being fat is when you stop being fat.

7424182 In real life, sure. In a land of magical talking ponies, not so much.

Besides, don't be knocking on the fetish, mate. I gave you fair warning in the description.

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I mean, these magical talking ponies are basically people, so you can't justifiably use that as an excuse to separate Equestria from the real world. And I don't think I knocked anybody's fetish. All I was doing was relating my own experience. I used to be fat, and never at any point in that period of time was I as happy as when I lost all that weight. I used to come up with all kinds of excuses--"I don't care what people think of me," or "I like being able to eat what I want, when I want"--but in the end, it was just me trying to justify a lack of control. Few things are as satisfying as that moment when you realize you've taken hold of the reins and become a better person for it.

You're allowed to like what you like, and the things you find attractive don't say anything about you as a person, but my experiences showed me that there is nothing fun about being fat.

7424215 Well, I'm sorry to hear that, and congrats to you on losing the weight. But given that we're talking about a world where ponies can talk, fly, use magic and control the weather, I honestly think I can use that as an excuse to separate Equestria from the real world. And no offence, but I think you're reading a bit too deeply into this. This is a fetish fuel fic -- nothing more, nothing less.

I think the reason for Shining Armor's increased appetite may be traced to the reason he's so fat: Cadance. He's not just gaining for his own enjoyment (though that's certainly part of it) he's getting fat for HER. Guy's gaining in the name of love, Twiley.

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Guy's gaining in the name of love, Twiley.

"You know, Spike," Twilight said sweetly, "it'd be a real shame if the town found out about those poems you've been writing."

Spike blushed deeply. "I'll be good."

I'm actually surprised Twilight didn't threaten Spike with the weight gain spell. In fact, given her experimentative nature with him, I'm even more surprised she didn't attempt it on him.

7424901 Hmm... I may have to write an alternative version someday.

i always enjoy seeing this little series continue, its some of your best work whenever you bring out this timeline

I still wanna see the rest of the mane 6's reactions to fat Shining. Cue Rarity suddenly charging by the inch and instantly making a killing by stuffing Shiny's wide ass in a suit. ;P

7432904 Which then leads to Rarity growing fat off the profits... and, more pertinently, Sweetie Belle.

7424215 This is a weight gain story, if you don't like it then why are you here?

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I was here because I wanted to give my opinion in a public forum.

Also, it's a little rude to drag somebody back to a comments section after they've been gone for a week.

7424901 Perhaps she knew about Dragons being highly resistant to magic.

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