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Shamrock95


Not much to say about myself -- I'm an Irish guy whose interests include MLP, video games, and occasionally writing fanfics.

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This story is a sequel to The Best Way to End the Day


Twilight is excited to finally have a chance for some quality brother-and-sister time when Shining Armour comes to visit Ponyville. However, when Shining arrives, he turns out to be much... wider than Twilight remembered.

Will Twilight get through a simple meal with him with her sanity intact?

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Two fat Shining stories within 24 hours? You're damn right it is! :yay:

6861739 Eeyup. Big Smoke is his spirit guide. :rainbowwild:

The last Story were just great but for this I am looking forward to seeing lots and lots chapters to fil me up for.

6862197 Glad you enjoyed it. Don't worry, there's more to come!

6862219 great to hear:pinkiehappy:

Number 45's... I love it.

Also, dammit, now I want a total greasebomb of a burger. Hmm, McD's IS open...

So, how long until Shining here is immobile?

6862395 Bad for the heart but good for the soul, am I right?

6862513 I didn't actually have any plans to make Shining immobile, I'm afraid. I am planning to do another fic about an immobile pony soon, though.

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Pretty much! There's a reason that it's referred to as comfort food.

... though i'm just as likely to decimate one of those $30 fruit platters. Or the veggie platters, given enough Catalina dressing for dip.

6863689 Same here. You ever tried raw carrots and lettuce with a lemongrass garnish? Food of the gods, I'm telling you.

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For real? Lemongrass?! ... huh. Never would have considered that. May have to give that a shot.

Now for one where Shining and Cadance pay a visit to Shining's mom and dad in Canterlot who find out their little boy isn't little anymore. :pinkiehappy:

6981916 I'll certainly be writing something like that someday!

Look at it this way, Twiley: You know how when you two were foals, your big brother gave the best cuddles ever? Well, as he gets fatter and fatter, those cuddles will get even better.

7167719 Thus goes the Fatpone Cuddles Theorem.

We desperately need more fat Shining/Twiley cuteness.

So, was Twilight's acceptance of her brother's new size an uneasy one, or more heartfelt?

7187086 A little uneasy.

I kind of wonder how Twilight's friends reacted to Shining's new girth. I actually imagine that the Apples would be quite pleased with Shining's appetite.

7189651 Imagine Shining slumped over the table at Sweet Apple Acres, face covered in pie and slipping into a food coma.

7189790 Picturing it,.......LOVING IT

Shining was around 280 in this story, and his fat was already squishing up against the door of the passenger car of the crystal express. Now that he's over 400 pounds......yeah, you're gonna need a bigger boat-er, train.

This story gave me a headcanon for Shiny: as a foal, he was a (more than) plump colt, but lost the weight through a combination of puberty and a desire to be in the guard.

7197350 Now with that headcanon in mind, seeing her brother so big and fat probably brings back some good memories for Twilight.

So, what do two number nines, a number six with extra dip, a number seven, and two number forty-fives consist of?

7226888 That's why I left it open-ended -- you can imagine Shining gorging himself on whatever you want. :heart:

We're vastly (as vast as Shiny's rump) overdue for more Shiny/Twiley time~ :heart: Sibling time is even more adorable than husband/wife time~. (well, okay. ALMOST more adorable~.)

So, when can we expect more BBBFF/Twiley time?

7477041 Soon, quite soon.

I don't play GTA. Care to explain the reference?

7477504 There's a mission in GTA San Andreas where you go to a fried chicken restaurant. One of the characters, a quite fat bastard, orders Shining's meal word for word.

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