Applejack wakes up and finds her friends working outside. Try as she might, it seems that any chore that she comes up with is either already done, finished, or complete. What is it that her friends are planning and why does it have to be today of all days.
I really wish the episode was like this, actually. I didn't hate the episode either, but it could have been better.
Upvote from me
PS. AJ is my fav, whose yours?
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Rainbow Dash
This was a pretty fun fic, I really enjoyed it.
However....
At the sound of a horn igniting, Applejack turned to see a light pink unicorn making a bunch of apples glow and pulling them diwk, “Starlight? Why are you harvesting apples.”
“Oh!” blushed Starlight as she paused in her work, “Twilight heard about my tendency to go and overdo it when it comes to magic. So she sent me out here to work on my self control.”
“Well, Ah suppose that’s ok. Gives me a chance to work on the fence,’ Applejack said.
it’s kind of a bit too much and I have work to do in the field,” Applejack said.
“Oh, you mean harvesting apples for market? Taken care of,” Pinkie said, point to a pink unicorn coming out from behind a tree, sweat running down her head.
“Starlight?” Applejack shouted.
Blushing, Starlight Glimmer nodded, “Oh Hi Applejack. Twilight kind of heard about how I kept over doing it with my magic. So, she told me to pracice on my focusing and harnessing. She told me that usng magic on one tree at a time at sweet Apple Acres would work.”
You kind of introduced Starlight Glimmer twice?
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Aww, she's awesome too XD
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I could definitely see this as an actual episode. It does need more editing though.
Needs some editing and cleaning up, but definitely worthy of a thumb's up. Good job!
Dreadnought
I love it!
I wish it was a real episode!
The "Applejack's Day Off episode isn't bad, but I'm seriously annoyed in how they made Flutter Brutter amazing but Applejack's not...
Thumbs up! XD
*holds heart* AAAAAAAAGGGHHHH!!!! x_x
(right in the feels)
Love the story and the moral.
But...
Why is this repeated???
Punishment duty?
This was just plum sweet. Love the effort her friends put in for her.
Chore 10: 5:00-Kill best friends for making me miss almost a whole day of work.
Chore 11: 5:30- Drink some hard cider while on a train out of Equestria to hide in Zebrica for crime of killing said best friends.
Best chore ever