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When A Lone New Canterlot Republic Soldier finds The Mane Six in the desolate wasteland of Equestria, 400 years after the Mega-spells dropped, he takes it upon himself to get them home, and possibly, Prevent the war, whatever the costs.

*Note* Rated Teen for Sexual themes, drug abuse, Gore, and some language. Takes place around 400 years after the Mega spells, 200 years after the stories of Blackjack, and LittlePip.

*Update* The Finale is here, along with a sneak peek to the next book. Enjoy.

Chapters (14)
Comments ( 64 )

I think you should of gone a bit slow there, don't start at level 7. Starting at level one is why I enjoyed FoE and FoE Project Horizons, and the reactions from the mane 6 could of been better. I hope you're able to improve as a writer. I do think this story has potential, but I think you could do a few revisions. Everything is just rushed. I barely know anything about Dust. I hope this helps you.

773585 I get where you're coming from, but Dust isn't a pony who is new to combat. As explained, hes a battle hardened combat veteran.
While I probably do some tweaking to him in later chapters, he's going to stay the same for the time being.

WHY arent the main six freaking out aboutbeing in the future.

789565 They knew they were going into the future. So they prepared for the worst. It'll probably be explained in the later chapters.

But I have plans for them.

Big, Big plans. :pinkiecrazy:

789630
Should we be scared? :pinkiecrazy:
Also, this is my very first Fallout: Equestria.....
AND I BUCKIN' LOVE IT! :rainbowkiss:
I play Fallout 3 and watch MLP: FiM, so yo can imagine my joy in reading these :derpytongue2:
Looking forward to more,
and I'll be watching! :twilightsmile:

~Rosalynn~:yay:

Wasn't Luna dead in the main story and celestia in a computer?

792624 Yes, she was. But this is in a universe of mechanics and automail limbs. The way she ended up getting here will be revealed in good time.:trollestia:

But until then, have another chapter.

791178 Well, only for a couple of them.

Also, I too play Fallout 3, and New vegas (though Fallout 3 was better in my opinion.) and i can definitely relate with you:twilightblush:

But I'm so happy that everypony's enjoying this Side fic, so I think I might start posting daily.

-Storm :moustache:

I love fallout this story is very good compared to most of them and by lord that fucking anti material rifle I love that thing I would love a backstory on what the fuck happend before this though

794590 With Luna :trollestia: Forgot to read that part, didntcha?

Shoot it in the groin fucking genius design on that machine but this story is very rushed in the beggining but as of now the story is moving across a nice smooth road

:fluttercry: *sniff*
I buckin' love Fallout Equestria... :heart:

Haha no but seriously.
This is honestly and seriously my first FoE.
I've said it before and I'll say it again.
IT's my first one, and the best one. I love it :pinkiecrazy:

~Rosalynn~:yay:

P.S. Oh Celestia... I just realized.. since Sophia's pregnant...
OH CELESTIA PLEASE DON'T LET HER END UP LIKE CATHERINE!
NONONO! :raritycry:

834063 Oh Rosalynn, don't worry, Sophia will be just... FINE :pinkiecrazy:

Trust me, there will be some twists and turns in this book that will make you question my sanity, if you already don't. :pinkiehappy:

But perhaps I will take your personal feelings into account, though I can't say for sure.:trollestia:

Thanks for favoriting and Liking the book. It really means a whole lot to me when you say that its the best FO:E fan fic you've read.

-Storm :moustache:

834434

Oh please please please don't take my feelings into consideration! :pinkiecrazy:
Maybe it's just crazy-Rosalynn-who-hasn't-had-sleep all-night- speaking, but I want this story
to take twists and turns.
And trust me, I question my sanity before any one else's.:pinkiecrazy:
XD haha no but seriously.

and no problem :twilightsmile:

~Rosalynn~:yay:

834524 Well, there you have it.

Now I have full liberty to do what I want with the characters.

Bad things are going to happen now. Very, bad things.:pinkiecrazy:

834544

YES! *arm pump* :pinkiecrazy:

I mean...
NOOOOOO! :raritydespair:

But seriously,
YES~! :D lol :pinkiehappy:

~Rosalynn~:yay:

WAIT A MINUTE? Oh um... wait.... Nvn
But i bet it was really awkward when dust was hanging right there XD
GIMME MOAR OR ILL HAVE TO START READING ASSASINS CREED CROSSOVAS :pinkiecrazy::pinkiegasp:

HOORAH!
:D Well we all know at the end Dj-Pon3 is always right!

This is the greatest thing i have ever read.....of all time!!!!
Liked and favorited and am eagerly awaiting the next chapter. :twilightsmile:

Okay kids, time for the final act of Fallout Equestria.

I know it's not going to be everything that you were hoping for, but, it's going to be damn hardcore.

Now, here's what I'm going to do. I want YOU to send me your ideas for how the last chapter should go. One lucky winner will get their idea featured, if I like it. If there aren't any things I like, I'm going to go my own way. You all have ONE week to send me your messages. That's it for now, children. I will most definitely give you credit for the idea.

-Storm.

XD 60's spiderman never ceases to crank out FoE stories!

Finale already? :fluttercry:

Ah well, can't wait for the sequel

1020059 Ahh, but 'tis the hardships of writing a good book. The end has to come soon. Don't worry, the next one will be much longer. I promise

1020164 I pinkie promise. And Nopony breaks a Pinkie promise. :twilightsmile:

1020204 i did once then pinkie turned a chunk of my flesh into a cupcake and thank god i have regeneration

1020239 it was from my chest do you know how much that hurt

1020254 did he get his stomach made into a cupcake and liver into a pie

1020259 No, but he did get crushed by a flaming truck. I guess that wouldnt hurt as much.

Anywho, I'm off. Good bye

1020269 seeya a truck i did get hit by an airplane one time while it was breaking the sound barrier

Your friend passed away? :fluttercry: I'm sorry to hear that.

Friend passed away? .... While it is sad it is life. Godspeed:eeyup:

Aw, man. I'd been wondering why the conclusion had been delayed, but didn't for a moment think it might be something like that. Sorry to hear it, please feel no pressure from me to rush back into anything.

BTW, something seems to have gone glitchy with this most recent chapter, despite a 2200+ word count it's only got two short paragraphs and ends with "รข" (a symptom of some of the other general glitchiness I saw during the Great FiMFiction Upgrade). All the other stories that I saw with this glitch recovered on their own but this one hasn't yet. Figured I'd mention.

1780059 Should be fixed by now. Thanks for the condolences everyone. It was really hard finishing the book, because everytime I started to try and finish it, I would start to go under that depressing stage knowing that one of your better friends died. Your support really helps! :twilightsmile:

Dust died? :pinkiegasp: What a great ending overall! :moustache: :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy:

Well that was one weird story. It was really rushed and I'm still not sure what the plot of the whole thing was.

2700041 One of my first stories. Definitely not my best. There really was no plot in this one, so I don't blame you if you got confused

2700071
I see. :derpytongue2: Well, anyway, it was otherwise okay, mostly. I think it'd be worth your while to try and iron out what the changes are in the world from the original FoE, and what's "supposed" to happen in this story and edit this story until it actually makes sense.The rapid fire play-out of the story is probably the most glaring flaw.

2700505 I'm definitely re-writing it before I do the sequel which is due out in a month or so. Thanks for the help!

2700514
Well, then. :trixieshiftright: Have fun with that. :twilightsmile:

I read this again and again because the fact he went out like a boss...i mean how he went through all that...to die and to save everyone and yet he will not see the changes in which he made for the greater good. This...no matter how many times i read this i cry at the end and is like "Man that's some emotion stuff."

Kinda wish he lived but i really don't think that would be fitting. Though i kinda wish he had a filly to continue on or something...XD

Other then that, this is still a great read and to re-read it again...it still has the same effects.

Mahalo

2755154 Geez, I never thought I could make anypony cry with the ending :twilightsheepish: but thank you for the compliment :pinkiesmile:

The sequel comes out next month, so hopefully you get to read it as well :D

-Storm

P.S. Are you from Hawaii? I live on Oahu, and I just noticed the "Mahalo" at the end there. A hui hou!

2757140 Whoa if you live on Oahu then XD wow i guess it's a small world but other then that i do live on Oahu. IN KAHUKU lolz. Any-who i look forward to the sequel then

Just a sneak peak? :fluttercry: AWWWWWWWW!!!!!

789565 I asked the same thing

794131 nice to see im not the only one that likes 3 over vagas

I just want to say that RD doesn't make BoS armour thats AJ because RD makes the Enclave amour (if thats what you are implying then say it a little differently)

Good story, minor things.

I will keep reading.

-Battle

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