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Ok, this looks cool. Just one thing: please, a damn traduction of all those strange terms!
7290163 Half the fun is to see if you can figure them out and which language they are in
, hint: the Changelin language is in Google Translate and coincides with one of the people where we get the legends about them and I in turn am basing the Changelings loosely on. But be careful the translate comes up odd sometimes.
Loving the story bro
oooo sounds fucking awesome
but the rating says otherwise
7314506 I took longer with the set up than I liked and still don't like one chapter. Plus I needed to find the stories flow.
7314759 is it in a different language?
7316081 I use different languages for different species and cultures. The Thestrals, or bat ponies, are loosely based of the the ancient greeks. I used google translate so blame them because I've gotten several different translations for things. Here's a quick list:
High Equestrian- Latin
Common Equestrian- English
Thestrals- Greek
Changeling- Welsh
Goat- Yiddish (Randomly just chose it from the google translate list)
Griffon- German
Reindeer- Norwegian
Diamond Dog- Finnish
Buffalo- Navajo
Kirin- Japanese
Qilin- Chinese
Zebra, Discord, Crystal Pony, and Unicorn (Of the 3 tribes they are the only ones that can stand alone. Rarity has controled the weather in one episode and unicorns have been seen growing flowers.) are still in flux.
7317498 yea ill never read this fuck the different languages im not gonna google every other sentence like for real man you couldn't do the different languages differently?
O_o
I loving this story
the lore and the world building makes me wanna squee
Hilariously over-complicated pretentious puffery. Love it.
Well I probably would have guessed Twilight in I knew trixie was in town, and as I remember facts with more clarity, I pretty much know all the ponies you described. continendam opus bonum instructus.
(Sorry if that was bad, Latin an't my lingua franca.
)
Yet another Celestia is evil fic...if you have to make her evil try making her a well intentioned extremist or something similar because right now making her evil just because is lazy.
7385527 Not mine either, but gooogle translate helps, though it's translations can be odd from time to time, which is half the fun of playing with it.
7385525 I kind of went over the top with all of these languages, cultures, histories, etc. But let's face it, Equestria seems pretty one sided and in the real word every culture has it's own historical baggage and languages. With the war not even kicked into full swing, but still a scramble to figure out what is going on, all of this just adds to the mess called war.
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I guess I need to flesh her out a bit more, but she is actually neither good or evil, per say. She just started down the slippery slope she is on and went with it. Petrified God A and things got easier, so when God B acted up she did it again and it worked and suddenly she had more worshippers from their old followers. With every new God challenging her it just became easier to deal with it that way. When neighbor A invaded, her people beat them and took their lands claiming it was through her divine being they won and took new territories. Since it worked so well, they did it again and spread futher. Since her peoples lives improved everytime she didn't stop it and even took the lead in it and adding more credit to the claims about her devine right. Basicly she is the result of a being successful and when her sister threatened her power by getting engaged and on a fast track to become Queen, Celestia removed the threat. Eventually it reached a point were she actually sort of believes it is her devine right to rule supreme over all. Hmm.... how best to sum this version of her up the best?
Like I said, I need to flesh her out more.
7385980 Okay now if that's what's going on then i can get behind this story and maybe even enjoy it, still feels like the the overused idea of evil celestia but its different enough for me to give a like.
Loven the world your building man, and that 'Cave World'(for lack of a better term) really got my attention; Almost mad me want to pack a rucksack, grad my rifle, and do some dimension hoping.
Keep it up.
Okay then, let's run that little baby through google translate aaaaand.....
Celestia's a big dumb meanie pants and Luna's super duper awesome: The Fanfic. Subtle.
Thank goodness for the synopsis or I'd tell the both of you where to shove that 'righteousness'
Also: I'm sensing a Latin fetish, gonna keep google translate on standby.
Look, I know it's hard coded into the fic that Celestia's going to be satan and Luna's gonna be Jesus(stopping just short of being literal in most fics like this) but do you have to make her incompetent as well? Her political power is how well her nation's doing. The less ponies she controls and the worse off they are the worse her standing will be in the world. One less pony race just weakens her standing immensely.
Scratch that, Luna's just as bad, she just thinks she's better than Celestia. Holy mother of psychotic raving lunatic, just arrest them for child abuse. The End. Game Over. Full Stop.
Okay, had to remove all the english for this one but:
Yeah, I'm just gonna call her Scootaloo.
A war party? Really? Also: Welsh? fuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuck
P.S: Leading a war party to a celebration where there'll be a whole bunch of civilians? Great job, really proving yourself better than your sister! Who am I kidding? I can already tell there won't be any moral repercussions for this.
You know, you can just say ten thousand years. It's just the first chapter and all this gratuitous second and third language bull has already run its course from interesting to a pain in the ass.
Celestia then raped all the sick puppies at the sick puppy orphanage before burning it down and using the insurance money to buy the little fillies orphanage and sell them all to be griffon meat. We get it, Celestia is literally evil itself.
Because you are standing over the rancor pit. Also because the author wants Celestia to be as evil as possible. I hope Luna has a few character flaws to balance all this out.
Fun fact: If you're traveling fast enough and you suddenly zip back the way you came you can die. Remember when not even half a chapter ago they hated eatchothers guts enough to raise a small militia and fight?
Meanwhile there are riots and panicking ponies all over Equestria over an unplanned long lasting solar eclipse with hundreds of thousands if not millions in property damage, probably some ponies getting trampled, all that fun stuff. So yeah, fun time for a chat.
Hahahahahahaha thousands of ponies are gonna die, isn't that just so charming and amiable? :D
Holy shit, evil celestia's really kinda hot.
what
Still lovin g this story, and I hope we get the next chapter soon.
I barely understand what is being said
I literally do it all the time
My family sucks and hates me and I still help them and strangers. What's your excuse?