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Derpytakesovertheworld

Derpytakesovertheworld #1 · May 26th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Not bad. Length issues though, the set up was painfully short. Pretty fun little cloppy story.
8/10 Would read again

BlackLight2015

BlackLight2015 #2 · May 26th, 2016 · 1 · ·

Not a bad story, I liked it, good job I would totally read this again.

garatheauthor

garatheauthor #3 · May 30th, 2016 · · ·

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Thank you very much, always glad when someone enjoys my stuff.

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Hey 80% is still an A so I'll take it. :P. No but really I will take your advice into account. If you could elaborate on the length issues, I would love to hear it. I'm still new to this and I have tons of room to improve.

DarthSylar12

DarthSylar12 #4 · Jun 1st, 2016 · · ·

I really liked. This I had the same idea for a soarin fic but it looks like you beat me to punch. Either way it was great and probably better than what I would have done so congratulations.

garatheauthor

garatheauthor #5 · Jun 1st, 2016 · · ·

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Hey, if you're interested in writing a fic go for it. There are plenty of ways you can interpret this scene. I won't complain if I get so see more SoarinXFleetfootXSpitfire on this site.

Thank you very much for the comment.

Derpytakesovertheworld