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I'm gonna watch this...If only to see what will come of it
Also to see if this kids a good match up against my OC
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7188870 Any of you guys know what I should make Shadow's cutie mark?
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Wolf head
Gotta keep it subtle
7275094 what would a wolf head represent?
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Well he doesn't like ponies right...to the point of wanting to kill them. He's like...a wolf in ponies clothing...plus he can control animals right?
7275151 he doesn't control them. They just know he's their prince. Oh! How about a manticor head and a Timberwolf head facing away from each other!
7275151 also, love your OC. what's his name?
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His name is Himmel. He wants to be a hero
At first I was almost dreading reading this. A black baticorn OC, with red magic and being your first story? Not the best setup. then i finished the chapter, and realized that he needed to be like that. Perfect. Can't wait for the next chapter.
7275777 sounds like someone(pony? Whatever) Shadow would want dead.
7276071 thanks. I was going for creepy angry disturbed child. Good to know that I got it right
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And shadow sounds like someone Himmel needs to stop
7283240 I'd love to see that fight
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I know right?
be for i read i need to know is chrissy good or bad pm me the anser pls
so far it is good to bad if he ran in to one of my ocs (The capten) he might be frends or dead
7309954 are you saying your OC would kill a twelve year old?
I can respect that
7310009 yes he woud he is called the ghost of the seas for a risen he is over 5000 years old and cant die but if you got rum you can be his frend
Very good setup; I'm now quite excited to hear Shadow Zal's story!
7310151 if you such a fan of changelings, check out my other story; 'One and a Million'.
7318869 ok i will
7318869 i love this story along with "the merchant of Equestria" keep writing these 2
Update?
7333778 working on it.
Hmm lets go with i want 2 say after alicorn twilight but fighting nightmare n de main 6 before or during or after they get de elements of harmony is just as good i cannot decide
7358497 welcome to my world!
7358549 if u choose 2 go with alicorn twilight path de plot is cut half?
After Alicorn twilight, or possibly even after twilight takes starlight as her student. Ask a former psychopath what they think of a current psychopath
P.s: when can we expect the next chapter of your merchant story?
7358590 soon my friend, soon.
7358580 I have no idea actually. Im kinda making most of this up as I go along
7358706 hmm then after alicorn twilight n 7358590 might be on 2 something with after starlight became twilight's student it could prove quite de help 4 driving de story
I say fight Nightmare moon
7358846 agreed nightmare moon, perhaps an ally in her? take her magic meh allwell
7359243 probably, also does Colt Somewhat remind you of a young joker or is it just me?
Dat gore though
In anycase, seemed like you switched prospective a few times. Careful when you add you instead of him or her or any other pronoun.
And yeah, Himmel would definitely have no choice but to kill this colt
7359243 I was planning on doing that (having colt take her magic) but I thought I might make him seem too OP. Was I wrong about that?
7359466 I'd love to see him try. I really want to write about that fight.
I actually thought it wasn't gory enough. It seemed a bit light
7359634 no not in a sense if you Work with it, let's see for great strength there is equal weekness
say he can steal magic,
limitations could be:
one type of magic? or a few similar types.
perhaps his body can not store much so instead he stores it in the forest itself and uses the forest as a magic reserve.
7359730 wow, way to solve that problem. I suppose using the original timeline would match the summary thought keep in mine that his fights won't just end at Nightmare Moon. He's fighting EVERYPONY (except one oddly enough. You can probably guess who)
7359733 the capten woud love to fight this kid might not kill him but tech him a lesan
ps is it fluttershy
7362179 on I have plans for him. hehehehe.
U should know who, I did kinda give you a hint
7362179 oh wait, I thought you were talking about shinning. My bad. I would love to write about that fight too actually.
7362284 you can i do not mind jest pm me
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Heh...Maybe a collaboration one day. Shadow vs Himmel (Which means Sky)
7365605 nah, his name is just 'Colt' now.
It could be one of those revenge things. 'You killed my father and now I want revenge' kind of thing.
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Himmel is more of a...traditional hero. He would fight him cause its the right thing to do
7365676 so more of a 'I will free the world from your evil!' Kind of thing then?
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yeah that's him. Looks at things in black and white cause that's how he was raised to be.
7365960 sounds like an anime plot.