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What was that dream? A vision or a prophecy? Is Discord returning, this time with his own personal army?
What will the Elements of Harmony do when they have to stand against six stallions who are their very antithesis.
Harmony versus Chaos. The Celestial Sisters versus Discord.
A personal Elements of Chaos story

Chapters (9)
Comments ( 31 )

But... if they are disharmony... they wouldn't be able to team up together...

At the very beginning, I noticed you used 'hands' a few times and not 'hooves'. :trollestia:

This is really interesting! I hope to be able to read the next chapter soon :pinkiehappy: :heart:

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Oh dawg, hate and anger (etc) is thing what most unite :P

THE DARK ELEMENTS (also known as Disharmony) IT'S THE BUCKING DARK ELEMENTS, BUCK YESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can not wait to see them, buck yes you just made my day 120% better my dear friend, BUCK YES!!!!!!! Also, if you need a run down of who is which I will inform you.......

Hatard (the really dark and very cruel half of Fluttershy and the leader of Disharmony also known as the Dark Elements...she is also known as Cruelty but that name is very rare, even amoung other villians and other Dark Elements)


Avarice (Rarity's dark half)

Sorrow sometimes known as Despair (Pinkie Pie's evil half and second in command)

Disloyalty (Rainbow Dash's dark half of course)

Dishonest (Applejack's shadowy half)

and Oblivion (Twilight Sparkle's dark half and sometimes third in command, she has no sense of humor and is straight to the point, even blunt)


BUCK YESSSSSSS!!!!!!!! THIS is going to be GOOOOOODDDDDD.....hoping to see even more enemies other then them and Discord though, you need ANY ideas, help or advice, then don't hesiatate to contact me....I'll be awating for each and every chapter and reviewing, it's about time someone did a story on the Elements of Harmoy's dark halves.

THE DARK ELEMENTS? (also known as Disharmony) IT'S THE BUCKING DARK ELEMENTS, BUCK YEEEEEEESSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can not wait to see them, buck yes you just made my day 120% better my dear friend, BUCK YES!!!!!!! Also, if you need a run down of who is which I will inform you.......

Hatard (the really dark and very cruel half of Fluttershy and the leader of Disharmony also known as the Dark Elements...she is also known as Cruelty but that name is very rare, even amoung other villians and the other Dark Elements)


Avarice (Rarity's dark half)

Sorrow sometimes known as Despair (Pinkie Pie's evil half and second in command)

Disloyalty (Rainbow Dash's dark half of course)

Dishonest (Applejack's shadowy half)

and Oblivion (Twilight Sparkle's dark half and sometimes third in command, she has no sense of humor and is straight to the point, even blunt)


BUCK YESSSSSSS!!!!!!!! THIS is going to be GOOOOOODDDDDD.....hoping to see even more enemies other then them and Discord though, you need ANY ideas, help or advice, then don't hesiatate to contact me....I'll be awating for each and every chapter and reviewing, it's about time someone did a story on the Elements of Harmony's dark halves.

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While my Elements of Chaos will be a bit different (all part of the reveal so no spoilers :pinkiehappy:). I will do my best not to disappoint.
Each anti-harmony will get their time to gloom, as it were, so please look forward to it. Thanks for all the kind words.

972519 Never a problem and stallion versions of the Mane Six huh? Hmmm....I'm down, just hoping to also see the Dark Elements (Disharmony) you know the mare version as well, maybe when they look into a mirror or get real stressed or angry (in Fluttershy's case) you know, like certain small triggers that may show them for a small (or large if you wish) amount of time, inner demons, you know?

Nevertheless...I will be waiting for each and every chapter eagerly:pinkiehappy: Are they male or female in this one?


Also, really, REALLY love your profile pic, Sweetie Belle is my favorite CMC and always will be. "OH COME ON!" best line ever from her LOL.

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The Anti-Harmony team are going to be all stallions. I'm doing my best to mix things up and not making it Unicorn v Unicorn, Pegasus v Pegasus, and Earth v Earth (with 2 exceptions).

972766 True that... maybe you should re-name the stallions so they will not sound the same as the mares....you know what nevermind, the Dark Elements (Disharmony) names could work for mare and stallion, long as they are still very you know...oppisite. Yeah, I hear you. Ohhhh, this is going to be SICK!!!!!!!!!!!

Damn, great chapter, to bad Flim and Flam did not join Arthus but hey, it's whatever....wonder who he is, and what's up with the three Wonderbolts? This is getting strange but in a very good way...hmmmmm......hoping to see more my friend, wonder what will happen next, and I like the new villain but honestly hoping that he is not the main villain (I really HATE main villain) I'll be awaiting ore...can't wait to see the Dark Elements. Got to love Discord, also...was wondering if the CMC could be in this as well, maybe even Derpy and Dinky?

Man that main picture is awesome. Great story bro, looking forward to more!:pinkiehappy:

Great chapter, I can't wait until the next! :pinkiehappy:

Just a few notes. Yes Gold Saucer is an Final Fantasy VII reference. Number 2: Sangre Movros is Black Blood in Latin/Greek. Three: Um... uh... The answer is yes, whatever the question is.

Well, three out of six for the orginal Dark Elements is not bad what so ever, you doing very well, I like it....Crulty is the leader, right? And I know that was not a Derpy refence that you just did? Are you making fun of her, becuase if you are then we might have a few problems, my brother.

Damn...this is getting so dark that I can't stop reading it....LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! the stallion Dark Elements ROCK!!!!!!!!! Or Elements of Chaos, either way....bad ass....for some reason I'm hoping on seeing the CMC soon...keep this up my brother!

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OMG OMG I LOVE U PICTURE :pinkiehappy:

1007441 Thanks friend, your pen name is really bad ass, and cool pic.

Ponified references. Yay.

LOL, Awesome, Applejack met her stallion dark half, nice, thought he would be more meaner towards her though, but I really enjoying this.

Rainbow Dash/Fluttershy? SHIT....count me in! And Nightshade was so close to, I thought that Mask would want to kill his light half before anyone else, but I guess a death is a death....this is getting more and more bad ass! Poor Apple bloom.

I need the magical synonym for techno babble. I got nothing. Magi Babble? Magic Babble? Magik Babble? Mag Babble?

Damn.....CRUETLY JUST SLAUGHTERED ALL OF THEM, KNID OF STRANGE HOW HE DOES NOT EvEN HAVE A SCARTCH ON HIM THOUGH...REALLY AM ENJOYING THIS STORY, BUT IT'S ODD HOW THE ELEMENT OF DECEIT IS TRYING TO BE THE GOOD GUY, WELL FOR A WHILE AT LEAST, CAN'T WAIT TILL FLUTTERSHY MEETS HER DARK HALF, this is going to be fun...sorry for the caplocks. And I like Magik Babble.

Curses.....hmmmm.....who resperts that harmony Element again? Damn, this is getting so bad ass and I'm really enjoying reading this story.

Sorry for the lateness and the short chapter. I had a funeral and a wedding to go to in one week. Promise a longer and better chapter if not tonight at least by the end of the weekend.
Btw. I have no idea how stories are put into groups do I have to do it or are there group mods of some type. Any answers will help.

1151116Shit man, I'm seriously sorry for that bucked up time....sounds like life and death bring taken seriously huh? Also, who was the voice? Any of the mares of Disharmony or something even more.....dark. Shit, this is getting so good, and also I got a new story with the CMC up, hope you like it.

Huh. Somebody else writing a Harmony/Disharmony duality fic. I must check this out. I wish to compare.

There is potential here. I hope you will continue. Good luck :twilightsmile:

I've had a feeling Nightshade has been deceiving everypony about not working with Discord, at least in some way, and I'd say what Discord says here implies it as well.

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