• Published 16th Apr 2016
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A Glimmer of Hope: The Beginning - Mewrilah

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Epilogue

Black - of the very darkest color owing to the absence of or complete absorption of light; the opposite of white. This color was appropriate for what today marked. One year had passed since that terrible battle took away the wolf they loved. They tried to postpone the funeral as long as they could, believing that there was some magic spell that could solve everything. Afterall it was magic that had saved them several times. They had considered going back into time even, but after Twilight’s experience with time travel and how it never really did solve anything, they abandoned the idea.


It was easier that there was no body, that Twilight, Luna and all of their friends had to look upon Nick’s battle torn corpse. Instead, the Tree had been merciful enough to leave them a beautiful statue of their hero. Still, it couldn’t have been kind enough to give Nick, someone who had given everything he had, another chance.


Both mares stood bravely at his side, knowing that he didn’t want them to grieve too much at his passing. He’d want them to stay together, keep his memory alive through their love and how they were all brought together.


Ponies, once knowing what had blanketed all of Equestria and who had saved them, had travelled to pay their respects, for both the princesses’ loss and to honor the wolf. Both princesses were grateful for each gift, accepted every condolence and hug.


Thorax and his changelings set to work on restoring the castle ruins. They were in abundance enough to both maintain control of the badlands and start anew, especially once the changelings began to integrate with the ponies. Being at the battle themselves, they understood the true meaning of friendship and were glad to embrace this new set of emotions, even if they had been draining love for thousands of years. This felt more satisfying, to earn love rather than stealing it.


Besides being his new palace to rule and be involved in pony affairs, Thorax wanted it to be Nick’s home as well, the wolf had lived there before fully becoming involved with Twilight and Luna and it was his own way to keep his best friend’s memory alive. Turning into him or delegating one of his changelings to on the anniversary would be too hard on him and Twilight and Luna, so he struck out that idea.


There was one more symbol to represent what Nick had done in Equestria, the Everfree Forest itself. While still wild, it was safe enough for ponies to now explore, once certain areas were either blocked off or had guards stationed nearby. The inhabitants could visit the much talked about Tree of Harmony and appreciate a forest that nopony could control.


As the ponies continued to pay their respects, Twilight and Luna looked up to the statue. For the briefest moment they could swear they saw it move, along with feeling him hug both of them tightly. They dismissed the thought, instead of trying to bring him back, they would keep him alive.


“Well I never thought my death would be so meaningful. I know you couldn’t bring me back completely, but maybe this is for the best.”


“It’s the best I could do. You also got to see Alex, Sabrina, even your parents as well. It worked out for the best. Also don’t think I didn’t notice you trying to let your marefriends know you were still here. We agreed to rules, remember? And you know how much I don’t like rules.”


“It was just a hug and some happy thoughts.”


“Well if you start possessing things, I’m gonna have to send you back in that statue.”


“Fine. Fine, I’ll be a good wolf. Thanks for keeping me in this form as well.”


“Well you did save all of Equestria, it's the least I could do. Honestly I don’t agree with Harmony on not just letting you live, but that’s what she demanded. If you could come back, then she’d have to answer to a lot of other ponies.”


“Yeah. I’ll take what I got. Still can’t I do something like materialize once every ten years or something.”


Silence.


“Fine. At least they’re still together, that makes me happy. Do alicorns really live forever?”


“I dunno. Stop talking and just watch. You should still be tired after all of that. A year wouldn’t be enough to even fully recover if you lived.”


“I never felt more alive, heh heh.”


“Ok, that one was good, I’ll admit. Well I have to go myself, things to do, so many things.”


“You know, I think that was the best twist, what you told me.”


“I’m surprised you didn’t figure out after all that time we spent together. I was trying my best not to spoil it for you.”


“Well you knew me well. I wasn’t sharp at reading others, you especially. I’m just glad you told me or I may have hated you forever.”


“I messed up. Somehow I got this chance and really wanted to redeem myself. You were the first one I thought of when the Tree told me the situation.”


“Well that means a lot to me. Shoulda known you never stopped watching over me. Well I guess I’ll let you go. See you around Discord, heh.”


“So long, brother.”

Author's Note:

Just a friendly reminder to leave a comment, fave and upvote this story! :yay:

Comments ( 45 )

Wow ,didn't see that coming.

No. Nonononononono. Fuck you tree.

Will there be a sequel?

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She does have her reasons. :applejackunsure:

8392279
You'd want one? What would you propose? Curious. :duck:

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! There has to be more to this! He cant just die and thats it!

8392306
What would you propose, my dear reader?

8392311 to be honest I hoped that Nick would've survived... But the tree had to be a dick. :/

8392314
Maybe eventually having a way for Nick to come back fully. If need be in another body?

8392320
Hmmm. I figured since I promised death, that you guys would be upset if I didn't kill him. :derpytongue2: But if I were to make a sequel I wouldn't know what to do with it. Evil has been vanquished. The ponies can go about their peaceful lives.

I have to say, this is a very interesting story. It stands out from many of the other things I've read on the site in more than one way. I very much enjoyed reading it.

8392335
It can just be a slice of life, it doesn’t need action to be a good story.

8392311
Honestly this is one of those stories where I'm happy with the end and believe that a sequel would ruin the story. However there are still questions that where not answered that I would like answers to. I'm going to suggest a slice of life story should you pursue a sequel mainly because questions could be answered with minimal risk to Glimmer of Hope's action filled story line.

8392943
So what questions do you want answered? Seeing how there are comments that would like a SoL sequel, those questions could help progress the "story". Right now I'm thinking about moving on, but if there's enough demand for a sequel, it'd be foolish of me to ignore that.

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I guess my question would be what would I have them do? I can figure a way for him to come back but once he's there I'm not sure what I'd have them do, either than get married. Could make it a clop if anyone is interested but SoL seems like it needs a purpose, otherwise it's just random events happening.

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Well I'd like to know more about why Discord called Nick brother and what the tree knew of that so called god that Nick killed. As for what to do in a slice of life story I'd suggest you read some slice of life stories on the site and take example of them. It should help you figure out what to do if you made a sequel.

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“I’m surprised you didn’t figure out after all that time we spent together. I was trying my best not to spoil it for you.”

“Well you knew me well. I wasn’t sharp at reading others, you especially. I’m just glad you told me or I may have hated you forever.”

“I messed up. Somehow I got this chance and really wanted to redeem myself. You were the first one I thought of when the Tree told me the situation.”

That should hopefully answer your first question. As for the second one, this story was based off my favorite game series, Final Fantasy. It always has "light" vs "dark", with the darkness being caused by some god that opposes the goddess, whose usual form are crystals (in this case the goddess is the Tree of Harmony and Phobetor is the evil god). Also true to the series, the goddess has to call on "Warriors of Light" to save the world. The Elements would be an example, but for this story Nick was the actual "Warrior of Light". So to answer your question, the Tree knew about the evil god from the very beginning, and because she was limited to Equestria, that's why she needed Discord's help in finding "Warriors". Each one succumbed to the darkness, and Nick was close to too, but as you saw, Discord (his brother from Earth) decided to "cheat."

TLDR: Nick's brother was given a second chance by the Tree to help him out, thus he "became" Discord, and she knew all along that Phobetor was there because I based this off the typical theme of my favorite video game.

P.S I'm not saying I won't do a sequel. I just need some time to think it out. Life is getting busy with applications to graduate school now coming at me, so there probably won't be any new fics for a while.

sequel? season 2?:pinkiecrazy:

8395773
lol, with how much you guys want a sequel, I am definitely not NOT giving it some thoughts. I do hope you guys like the other stuff I put out too. :rainbowlaugh:

8396927
how dare you use best filly! :twilightangry2: (Applebloom is soo cute, especially her big bow).


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I will make a Pinkie Pie promise to those that were vocal and those secretly wanting a sequel that I will think about it. :pinkiehappy: To be honest I wasn't expecting this type of response for the end, so I'm not really prepared to just write a sequel now. If I'm able to come up with an idea or not, I will inform you of my decision. :twilightsmile:

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MUAHAHAHAAHAH!!!:trollestia:
i can use other ponies and make them cry!:trollestia:
UNLESS
you make a sequel! MUAHAHAHA!!:trollestia:

guilt trip!:pinkiecrazy:
woot~!:trollestia:

A sequel with nick just coming back to life would be a little boring and standard (though bringing him into an alternate universe where the story repeats itself but in a less serious tone would be fun)
I suggest one where the story is somehow expressed through materialized objects/letters, leading to eventual acceptance of his death (which im sure the two alicorns are close to anyways) leading to a open-ended conclusion.

8398666
that is an interesting idea. saved and stored in internal memory. :trollestia: will definitely add that to the other ideas I have. :twilightsmile:

I can't believe this story is finally over... I enjoyed it at least. I wouldn't mind a sequel but I do not think one is required.

So were you still thinking of doing a sequal to this?

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Yep! It's still in the works! Things have come up but never fear dear reader, it will be worth the wait! :twilightsmile:

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Yay ^^. Can you tell me when its posted?

8815924
If you have me followed, I'll post a blog mentioning it's up. :raritywink:

9443586
I wanted to add some realism to this story, despite it being in a magical land full of talking ponies. :pinkiecrazy: I also drew from some personal experiences and exaggerated them a bit. Glad I was able to make a connection with you and hope you continue to enjoy the story! :twilightsmile:

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I would too. But for Nick, you'll kinda see why he isn't later on in the story. Related to his first love/heartbreak. :raritywink: It's not developed too much in this chapter, but it's mostly because he's found no luck in dating and at a dead end in his life that he's kinda come to accept whatever happens.

OMG!!!!!!!!!!! DISCORD IS HIS BROTHER????!?!?!?!?!

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Yeah, it was kind of a way to tie in his broken relationship with his brother on earth into this journey. It also served as a redemption for the brother, and will play some parts in the sequel (as well as get more fleshed out as opposed to being just thrown in there like it seems). :raritywink:

You know, with a title like that, I'm a little surprised there isn't a Starlight Glimmer tag.

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Yeah, this was in the works before Starlight Glimmer was known to be a good mare. She was still just that leader of the equal cutie mark cult when I conceptualized this story. I had thought on making her more involved, but at the time I had developed the other characters too far in. The glimmer part is more related to how small a spark of hope there is in this universe, but maybe she may play a greater role in the sequel. I have a rough layout and know the ending, but the journey is the fun part. :ajsmug:

Disclaimer: While this takes place after the Cutie Remark, for the sake of simplicity, the Elements of Harmony defeated King Sombra, Queen Chrysallis and Lord Tirek.

But, didn't those episodes take place before The Cutie Re-mark?

Bah, the story was fine, but the ending upsets me. I don't see why the tree would force that hero to die. That's not a harmonic thing to to do.
That aside...
Evil and good must coexist. Light can not exist without the dark. You can not understand good without evil to give context. So... how would destabilizing the balance be harmonic?

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You shall see in the sequel. shameless plug :trollestia:

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Hope you don't mind but, I shall wait till it is finished to read it. I read many other stories here as well so, when updates come out the stories get... muddied together reading a part of a story here a part of a story there and so on.

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Canonically incorrect. She geeked out on gryffin culture in the show.

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