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Rytex


Hey, you know that really good author who has quality stories that everyone loves? I'm not that guy, he's over there. I'm that mediocre guy that's lucky to have as many followers as I do. Thanks!!!

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This story is a sequel to The Apprentice, the Student, and the Charlatan


NO LONGER THE CANON SEQUEL. Perhaps you are looking for The Archmage's Last Bow?

It began with The Apprentice, the Student, and the Charlatan, but now the story continues, Even In Other Worlds.

Nathan Samuel is a normal guy. Decent grades in college, a girlfriend, an apartment, and a stable source of income. That much he thinks he's sure of. One fateful day, however, the spellwork of a curse surrounding everyone he knows suddenly drops from around him, and he is able to remember who he is: Nova Shine, the Night Master of Princess Luna.

Meanwhile, a coalition of villains to Equestria has been assembled to keep things in check. Queen Chrysalis, whose job it is to use her changeling forces to prevent any kind of organized uprising; Sombra, who was the one who cast the memory curse in the first place, is to keep it in check; Discord, who is doing little more than standing for back-up; and Nightmare Moon, watching the Elements personally and reporting back to their mysterious "benefactor."

Following a conversation with Princess Celestia, Nova now knows what he needs to do to return to Equestria. The Elements of Harmony were restored to the Tree of Harmony, but the spirits of the Elements live on in their Bearers. With all six of them unable to remember who they are, and worse, with all six hating each other, Nova Shine now has to work to restore the Elements, and in the process try to make his fiancée fall in love with him again, to return all of them to their home.

NOTE: Gore is rather light; tag is included for safety.

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 120 )

I'm having a hard time waiting for the next update :C

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Well, it might take some time before the next one happens. I got final exams in three weeks, and I have two classes whose passing grades are hanging in the balance, so... priorities and all.

I'm just glad to have the Season 3 stuff out of the way. A kinda confusing, borderline HiE fic is just what I need right now. And how nice that it's been gift wrapped by the great Rytex himself.

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"Great" is debatable. And it isn't HiE, it's Ponies on Earth, so it's a reversal.

This is going to be good! The first chapter already raises a lot of questions, why does Sombra help Nova? Does Chryssie stil remember Nova from his time in the past? And who is Natalie (my guess is Envy)?

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Ask me no questions, I'll tell you no lies.

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I thought a bit about it and I think a already know the answers. If we can believe the first story Sombra can see into the future. And when he sees the chance to get more than just a village full of pony's turned human he will grab it.
Only problem is that Discord surprised Sombra when they found Nova and Twilight. Is Discord so random that even Sombra couldn't predict him?

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If I spilled the beans here, would that really make for an entertaining story?

You may rest assured that you are

on some things. Or all of the things. Maybe. Probably. Could be right about all of them, could be wrong about all of them. You'll just have to wait and see, won't you?

Chrysalis is so cute at the end!

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Rytex my friend u have capturd my interest yet again.

And now I say onto the next chapter I cant wait fir it

Rytex...you are a clever one. I can't stop enjoying this series. It's one great chapter after another. You, my friend, are a genius

Sooo going to enjoy following this sequel. I adored the last one and hopefully this will be just as good.

2 months s better than nothing, either way I am happy to see a new update!

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Naw, I just put my grown up pants on and did some things. Do good in class, get a good job, etc.

4130629 good, it is nice to know that you put studies ahead :D

At least we can get updates! And fighting magic Z cause it was like watching DBZ lolol

must. have. MORE!!! I can't get enough of this story. i wait for it all the time, hoping to find more and then CLIFFHANGERS! you devious person. great job on the story. :ajsmug: :yay: :rainbowwild: :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy: :raritywink: :derpytongue2:

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I studied in the Steven Moffat School of Cliffhangers, with a minor in the Vintage M. Night Shaymalan Plot Twist. Should come as no surprise I leave these endings.

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you sir. I applaud you for both those burns. and also, you have good taste in schools.

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Not really a burn. Wasn't meaning to make him apply cold water or purchase a Burn Heal for P600. Was just making an observation.

Hooray for faster updates

Another great chapter, Rytex. :twilightsmile: And I must ask how it's so easy for you to write fighting scenes? It's really difficult for me to do.

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You say it like you could give me a ten second prompt and I could write the entire finale action sequence from The Dark Knight. Its not terribly easy for me (for goodness sake, the club fight scene was supposed to be a lot longer, but Nova didn't want to fight), but all I do is let the characters react and battle like they would.

Wonderfully written, as always, Rytex. You have an amazing style to your writing.

4732329 either way it is great to see your writing again and happy to see a update ^^

good chapter like the rest of them rytex:eeyup:

Fuck yeah. Chryssie is back! I foresee some alliances shifting.

Fucking beautiful. I still don't know how your stories get so many down votes. I could NEVER tolerate a human ponies on earth story but you just make this work. Keep it up.

Awwwww. that was nice of Nova to do that for flutters. Oh man is he gonna have a tough time explaining this one to twi.

dang man! you got Sabre on the nose. on an unrelated note, This chapter was really well written and I can't wait to see where you go with the story next. Keep up the great work!

The premise makes me wish he was twilight sparkle instead.

I wonder if bokura no kiseki has updated yet?

oh crap. that isn't good....how will nova get out of this one? Can't wait to find out

And of course, cliffhanger !

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..............I already can't wait for the next chapter! Whaddayasay you post the next chapter tomorrow, eh? :pinkiehappy:

Well, congratulations i was winning the whole not-falling-for-it thingy today until i read this wonderful chapter! :pinkiegasp: :rainbowlaugh:
Ps: happy april fools! :ajbemused:

you sir..are cruel. brilliant, but cruel. love your stories

Your evil I read the entire chapter waiting for the actual story until I got to the end.

Wow that was a different tone then what you normally do.

That being said I found the chapter really good. Looking forward to more!

I refuse to start reading this until it's complete. I finished the first story just over a year ago and just finished reading it again. I can't wait until it's finished man, keep up the good work!

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You are going to be waiting a long time. I wen over how I think the chapters are going to go down from here last night, and I think I'm only about halfway through. It's taken me a year and a half just to get halfway through this bad boy. But then, I'm also juggling a rewrite of Apprentice, Starbound, school, work, etc. etc. Last time I went all out on writing in a semester, I passed only two classes.

6150274 Yeah I kinda figured I would be, but I've started so many great stories and gotten invested in them and then the author would cancel for whatever reason. So I'll wait as long as need be. But I absolutely love your writing, you should be publishing books. Speaking of which, if you wouldn't mind, I'd like to download the first story and take it to a local print shop and have it turned into a one-off book to keep at my house. That's how much I love your writing.

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