Just another guy passing the time creating stories and artwork. Im into headcanon and backstories of characters. and i cant wait to see what season 6 has in store for our favorite ponies. Live long :D
Our dear Sweetie Belle goes missing. And no one knows where she went. Well pony does, and its not very pretty. She's been abducted and takes everything the Mane Six and the local police have to find her, alive or dead. The hard part will be breaking it to Rarity that her little sister may not be coming home anytime soon, or if she does, she wont be breathing.
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Me: What's this!
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Me: WHAT IS THIS BEAUTIFUL STORY
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It struck me as a bit too Brusk.
Ive told others my stories are works in progress. i dont pretend to be an expert, or master author. My writing skills usually take a back seat to my Artwork. Thats what im truly proficient at.
Ive never understood why some people have to be so arrogant or act like an asshole online
this story is on hiatus until people can learn not to hide behind the dam dislike button. It doesnt help me as an author when someone decides to do stuff like that. Either comment on what you liked about it or dont bother touching it at all ok.
7117364 im putting this story on Hiatus. critiqueing someone to the point that they think its more harsh then helpful doesnt really help anyone as an author, ive seen others on here delete comments that they deemed disruptive and not helpful at all. i have the strong belief that no one deserves to live on a pedestal. NO one is better than me, NO ONE. People that think they are, usually have superiority complexes, and those are not something to be Proud of.
7145648 come to think of it, ive always been defensive when people critique me too much. + sorry for the late reply
This is a horrible, not very good paced story. The solution was way too quick and you don't capitalize correctly.
You really need some help with writing. You should hire an editor. I'm open.
7622223 go for it.
im too fucking tired trying to fight people when I think their being stuck up and unappreciative. So feel free to proof read this and a few others.
7145648 I got someone to proof read this. Im tired of fighting people that are stuck and unappreciative. Apparently its better to ruin others state of mind and shit like that.
7622217 I'm working on it when I can. but between doing this and working on Source Filmmaker. My attention and sanity get stretched thin at times 0_0.
and i just started using an editing program called Grammarly.
7145648 If you happen to see this, i found a program called Grammarly.