Due to LIghtning Dust's reckless actions at the academy , she had been kicked out because of the incident involving that tornado and nearly killing Rainbow Dash's friends in the process. If it hadnt been for the other cadets saving, they could of been killed or worse. Now she finds out that her older brother Sky Stinger, just got in because of both Twilight and Rainbow Dash seeing and helping him with his confidence issue.
If he can get in, maybe she could be given another chance. That was if she could swallow her pride and confront Dash without getting a Black eye out of it.
Thanks for the short read! Nice story, keep up the good work!
7646180 np. i plan on it. any chance you could read through another one of mine and look for errors?
7646235 Sure just pm me!
7646724 ok
Feels a bit rushed, but you did this better than I could've pulled off in 1,000 years!
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Sorry for the late reply, thanks
I would have just thanked them and then left.
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yea, i could have written it that way. i wanted to give Dust a chance at redeeming herself though.
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I know. I’m just saying what I would have done in her position.