Rainbow Dash takes an impromptu eating contest a little too seriously.
This story is cancelled as of 10/4/16. See my blog post for more info.
Fetish Warning: absolutely blatant weight gain/stuffing fetish story. Not much plot.
Chapters one and two edited by Abubble1234 and Not Worthy. You da real MVPs.
Cover art by a fan who wished to stay anonymous. Used with permission.
The Baron of fat pone is back!
Loving it so far, thanks!
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Thanks~
THE BARON RIDES AGAIN
This is utterly fantastic. I think it's wholly unnecessary to say 'MOAR' since I'm pretty sure you know that already.
Fantastic so far!
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Next chapter!
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I'm back, baby.
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Thanks!
*crosses fingers for immobility*
Can't wait for an update
7112266 If I remember correctly you left fim fic for a while, I loved your stories back then. My favorite of your stories was FO:E broken scale, are you planning on a continuation of that story? I must say it was as hot. Tons of ponies locked in a place, in a competition to get as obese as possible? Wish that were my world. I might have a chance against that fat bitch (what was her name again). Great job on this story by the way! I can't wait for the next chapter!
there's only one way this can end.
Well this is an unexpected surprise! The plot thickens! Pun unfortunately intended!
Just something I noticed lol
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Is that so? I felt like this is one of the weaker things I've written in a while, so I wasn't sure. :K
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fuck
Really liking this so far! I love how Applejack has gotten so much bigger than Dash, and how both of them no doubt will continue to grow~
When will you be able to finish this?
I gotta say, I really enjoyed this one very much, and I really hope you find the time to add more chapters to it!
I loved the generous details and deacription of each and every action, keeping a good balance with the pace of the scenes.
I'm happy that the narration focused on Dash, even in the copetition chapter, as the story automatically made AJ the antagonist.
A bit of Flutterdash could be spotted or hoped for, which was very much welcome.
The choice of Dash being fattened at a slow and realistic pace, made it fine into the story, as I've seen too many ultra-overexaggerated weight gains (also, myself being a fan of slow-paced, tame chubbiness; tending to dislike fat rings, but round shapes with only slight folds - exactly as Dash was portrayed).
Of course, this may come up to preference, but I have to express what made it good for me.
A bit of over-forcefeeding is always welcome, and I'm not saying that I wouldn't enjoy some extreme bloating / fattening in later chapters; I just really hope you do more :3
Thank you for being awesome, and keep up the good work!
Cancelled?
How the hell can it be cancelled? Was there going to be more!?
I thought what we got was the whole story!
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No, there were several more chapters planned. You can see what was finished of chapter 3 in this story.