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The Lutece twins


I think I am done with creating stories, just don't have that drive anymore nor the creative juices. but hey, continue to read my stories to you're hearts content

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Kefka is dying, he has been defeated by the heroes and looks at them with horror. As he slowly fades away, he had one last thought, to live again and make something that he has never had, friends. He wakes up and finds himself in a forest, in a new body. Has his wish been answered and he can make up that something that he didn't have, or will he try and take over Equestria like how he tried with his homeland?

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Comments ( 24 )

I don't know if I should be horrified or giving you applause for this fic.

6690020 for the horrified, what exactly do you mean?

6690763 This is KEFKA we're talking about here!

6690974 yea I know. He's a madman who's insane with power and killed a lot of people.

How do you know for sure that Kefka's canon counterpart wanted friends? (I haven't played the game BTW)

6702490 Hey, when your dying, you tend to regret what you have done wrong, just like Kefka here. He regretted what he has done wrong and wanted to start over. And he got his wish. And the game is quite good too.

6702633 I remember buying a used GBA version of the game but I didn't finish it because I couldn't use Sabin properly (I HATE HIS GIMMICKS! It was in the early parts of the game just after Edgar's kingdom buried itself in the sand.) and I find the game very good in spite of not finishing it. In fact, it was one of the better FF games I've played in spite how little of it I played.

6703536 I'm pretty good with Sabin. If you want to know his moves, go to his ability chart and look at blitz. It should tell you what moves he has and his to activate them. And I like it, just like how I like Final Fantasy 10

6704559 I was kinda mixed with FFX (my first FF game) at first but after a couple of replays, it became one of my personal favorites along with FFIV and VI.

Is that Final Fantasy? I don´t know if I like the character, and I don´t know exactly his game, but I think I try this story too.

6771170 yea, it's final fantasy, the 6th one to be exact.

"My name is Princess Luna. I rule Equestria alongside with my older sister, Princess Celestia. One of my jobs is to watch over the dreams of the many ponies across Equestria, and beyond it seems, with you not being from Equestria. N-not that it's a problem! I just wanted to meet you and figured this was the easiest way." She said. Kefka looks down.

Well I prefer it if she doesn´t knows the names, and isn´t that clever if she suddenly sees a Human, but it is okay.

"We heard a rumor that you aren't from Eqeustria." Twilight said.

how? Right now it starts to get a bit to much with them knowing that he isn´t from here.

Otherwise the story is not bad till now, I hope he actually has his unique branch of magic to make him special.
I start to actually wish for a Kefka X Pinkie romance later in this story. However if you should do something like that, I would like that the romance happens before the story is going to end, or a sequel after this story, with them actually starting said romance with the first chapter.
However that would need the romance to be prepared in this story already.

6772322 interesting, I may do that. A super evil villain from another world getting the hots for a pink party pony.

"Huh wha? Noponies attacking?" He asked.

He should probably still talk like a Human and use the term nobody for a while.

"Stay." He said. Pinkie has a blank face as she sat. Kefka uses a metal claw to lightly pat Pinkie's head.

"Good girl." He said.

"Ruff!" She barked. Kefka blinks in confusion.

Sometimes I feel like I have a weird humor, that is actually one moment where I had to laugh a bit.

"Yeeaahhhhh pobably not." Discord said.

"So she's one of those people eh?" Kefka said.

"Yeah, she'll probably find out more about that thing than you ever have, or ever will." Discord said.

at least they speak about it.

I like this story, and the one with the Pokemon, if you could think about putting in a romance for Kefka, I would probably prefer another chapter for this story at the moment. Somehow I even started to get curious about a female Kefka, it somehow looked good in my head.

6772367 indeed. We need someone to draw a female Kefka! And mare Kefka!:pinkiecrazy:

6772372 Well I somehow like strange looks, even if I don´t wear something like this myself.

I would like to have a new chapter please.

Why isn't there a slice of life tag?

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