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The Lutece twins


My goal is to create great stories that everypony will like, so it's nice to meet you. Enjoy my stories to your hearts content. Enjoy. Used to be Golden oath.

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What would happen if James get's sent to a world filled with technicolor-ed ponies by Discord & is transformed into one of his favorite Pokemon, a zoroark? Some good comedy & a little mischievous tricks. Will James be able to get back home or will he be stuck as a zoroark in Equestria for good.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 101 )

Not a pokemon fan but it's pretty good. Please continue with this story :twilightsmile:

Amazing as always wouldn't you say girls
:raritywink: it is fabulous
:rainbowderp: that was AWESOME:rainbowdetermined2:
:yay: yay
that WAS AMAZING:pinkiehappy:
you did a good job sugarcube:ajsmug:
that was an interesting read:twilightsmile:

5799954 Hey, some people aren't, but i don't mind. :moustache:

5800363 awww thanks everyone. :twilightblush: I like this story as well.

i'm liking this ^_^ also ''OMG SOMETHING FELL THROUGH MY ROOF SCREAMING I T MUST BE A MONSTER KILL IT WITH FIRE!!!!!!!!!!!!'' lol

5801478 thank you & hahahahahahaa, that's funny! :rainbowlaugh:

On a scale of one to ten how stupid is Twilight Sparkle in ignoring her own advice?

5807807 but overall, she'll be suspicious of the bipedal fox (James) in the story.

Do you need an editor? The story is good but the spelling/grammar is detracting a little bit from my enjoyment.

Hmmmm "Zoroark Zoroark" ( Oh shit)

5808040 *nods* "Zoro zoroark" (Yes indeed)

5808045 Zor-Zoroack-roack-zor-Zoroack? (Why are we talking in pokemon?)

5808066 *shrugs* zoro zor zoroark zor (this is just for fun)

5807944 Where is you quantifiable number?

Also, suspicion. The Zoroark was running AWAY. Tackling a runner is never a good idea!

Ah man, someone beat me to it. Great story so far. (Big Zoroark fan)

5808897 It's okay & thank you, & i am a huge Zoroark fan as well

Being a Pokémon fan and a Brony. I am really diggin this story. How do I end up in these places?

5821116 *shrug* I don't know, but thank you for liking my story :twilightsmile:

"Zoro Zoroark Zoroark Zoroark" (i am enjoying this please update soon)

Amazing. Must have more!:pinkiecrazy:
Keep up the excellent work!

5912283 thank you I will have more posted soon. I am glad that you like it.
:derpytongue2:

I'm loving this man! I shall wait for the next chapter to come out! :pinkiehappy:

5935368 yea it'll take a while for me to make another chapter because of school & stuff. Sorry. & thank you as well.
:twilightsheepish:

Onward to the next chapter! :twilightsheepish:

FINALLY AFTER ALL THIS SEARCHING, I'VE FINALLY FOUND A ZOROARK IN EQUESTRIA FIC!!! I COULD ALMOST SCREAM!!!
:yay:yaaaaaay

I must have more, or somepony may get hurt:pinkiecrazy:... I mean, um, can you please continue this story:scootangel:

I give you a dislike. But today is opposite day, and if it wasn't I would upvote instead but either way is fine! :pinkiecrazy:

6280715 lol, looks like someone's feeling pinkish :rainbowlaugh:. Anyway thanks for the like.

6281679 this was a pretty good story to read. Need moar.

6281718 I know, I need to write more chapters.

6281787 chite more wrapters: I switch the ch and wr around.

wouldn't the illusion wear off after he fell asleep?

6299085 most likely, but fluttershy left before it does.

You still have your story labbled under haitus.

6302551 thank you, forgot about that.

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