Michael Smith was your average working man. He is taking care of his daughter Sarah after his wife Samantha died of a car crash years ago. They both had something in common, they both liked the kids show My little pony. Michael didn't care if people laughed at him or hated him for watching the show, it made him happy. But one night on his 25th birthday, when he woke from a strange dream, he and his daughter are slowly turning into MLP characters, but not just any characters, but the father and daughter of chaos, Discord and Screwball. Will they find their way to New York to stop a insane version of Discord and save the world, or will they get blamed for what's happening and get thrown in jail?
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A five score divided by four story.
Rated teen for some crude sexual humor
DOUBLE THE MADNESS, DOUBLE THE FUN.
THE FUN HAS BEEN DOUBLED!
6618702 lmao
Indeed it has! 
okay how can this possibily be a Five Score Divided by four story. Discord is behind the entire thing, he wouldn't to it to himself.
6618730 I thought I would add a little twist where a evil version of himself cones and tries to get rid of him. So, if you don't like it, then sorry.
This is actually a great story so far.
Good job and keep up the great work.
interesting
6618827 thanks man!
this is actually my first time doing a five score divided by four story. So yea thanks! 
6618848 indeed it is my friend.
6618850 You are wlecome.
And this is my first time reading one.
6618748 the issue is it being Five Score, it breaks the ruels of five Score like the Lightning Dust story did.
6618960 I see.
6618714 Don't forget to make sure that there are massive misunderstandings, Bon Bon is a badass changeling spy, AND DISLESTIA IS REAL!
Please?
6618976 But it'll be awesome! I was thinking of writing this because I never saw one, but so much yes!
Wait, so the restriction on these has been lifted?
6619677 I might think about it. And thanks for liking!
6620351 THANKS!
6620922 it's no problem my friend.
6620940 But wouldn't it be better to have them appear a couple years after Evil Discord died. That way there would be even more misunderstandings?
6620956 lol I see what you did there.
6621091 What do you mean?
But I fI had done this, I'd have done it a couple years after the events when Discord's reputation was set in stone. And Celestia goes back and forth for diplomatic missions, but always stays to hang out with her old friend who has a daughter or little sister. They'll play chess.
And then he disappears. And two UMAs appear.
So the misunderstandings begin. AND ROMANCE BLOOMS!
6621097 I see
6621122 And what's the mustache mean?
6621150 that's how I usually express my "I see" parts. Like I understand and stuff like that.
6621209 But please let there be Dislestia!
6621251 maybe. Don't know yet.
6621281 Please.
6621323 I'll talk with blood splatter about it.
6621347 Yes!
6621419 lol
6621431 Thank you!
6621497 itsa no problem my friend.
6621505 Thanks!
6632207 will do!
Huh... I wasn't aware my comment was enough to get deleted over.
Guess comments about improvement are not appreciated here. Shame.
6641552 look, sorry for deleting it. Because I have a proof reader. I give it to him before I post it. Sooooo, yea.
as long as it isn´t part of that universe, where everyone turns into mlp characters, and Laurent Faust is on the TV asking for the main six, so they can help her to defeat Discord, then I´m going to like it.
I hate that universe only, because it probably cause them to transform back into their Human forms in the end.
6769939 I see, I was going to put a twist at the end, when I get to it.
6769947 aaaah so it is one of those right?, well okay I give it a chance, I just think if something change it should stay that way,....more or less. I would probably don´t ask to be transformed back or stuff like that. I´m not even sure how I would react about being away from home, but it is what I hate in some animes, one hero is going back home, and that means he can´t never visit that world again. However he doesn´t even seems to think about them anymore.
Well before it get´s confusing I just start to read in a few minutes.
6771166 yea, it is, and I see.
what is that supposed to mean?
6775082 this is my first time working in a story like it.
. Somehow because of the description, almost everyone looks like an abomination to me right now, well not sarah and Lyra is the worst chase right now. I guess I get the wrong image in my head.
Okay I have read a previous part again, I understand it now.
hhhhhmm that is something new, and while I´m a bit tired, which could affect my opinion, I still think that it is good.
6775128 okay and I see.
ahhh well I like Screwball the way she is, but that´s not to bad I think.
that makes it an somehow interessting solution for the kiss.
This sounds a bit weird, like he isn´t even thinking about trying to get feelings for her, or how should I say this.....
This somehow looks like he would be lying, it is hard for me to believe that he already loves him, with how he was acting a few minutes/hour before. It really looks like he would only do it because Lyra wants it, and not because he even feels a little bit for her. I can´t say if he started to like it later, but it seems to soon for him to say it.
well that´s cute.
hhhhhmmmm not my favourite of your storys, but it is good, the only thing that I can´t really believe till now is him honestly loving Lyra
6775233 yea, I am going to have it where he starts to grow onto Lyra.
6775267 sorry but I want tp make sure I understand what you mean, sometimes I´m not sure I translate it correctly.
I understand that you want to make a scene which explains why he loves her, or what I actually think, you want to make some corrections.