Hi! I'm an MtF transexual who writes a lot of fics! I hope you all really enjoy my work (though i have a tendency to not update certain stories for long stretches of time... Anyway! I like adventres!
This story takes place after Apple to the Core.
Twilight, her father and their farmhands have been asked to go to a small town in the west that has not answered its letters nor has any messengers sent their returned. Bringing Rainbow Dash along, the group discovers that the town is facing a dire crisis as a terrible being seeks to bring 'justice' to the town...
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This is certainly going to be nice and spooky.
6583061 hehe glad you think so :3
Clint Eastwood
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lKITYu7z-AY
Hmmm.
Think this ghost itself made a big mistake. The elements of harmony couldn't be anywhere further away from guilty. And now it has to deal with those who can easily bring it donw.
6583572 you are of course assuming 1) the ghost even knows what the elements are and who bears them and 2) that this matters to him somehow
6584557 cause negative entities are kinda vulnerable to the evil ass kicking things?
6584564 do keep in mind only twilight and rainbow dash are here, the others are still back in Ponyville, and nobody brought the actual elements with them.
For what he did, I hope the others find a spell to bring him back to life so they can beat him up without killing him again.
6616852 i already know how he is defeated ;3
6618194 Of course you do. You're the author.
6618222 XD so what do you think of Hangem High so far?
6620113 Definitely creepy. But also very intriguing.
6620505 Oh? how say, may I ask?
6620752 Well, the biggest mystery for us readers is how his ghost is still around in the first place.
6620812 XD you'll find out soon, but its not like its some big revelation
6620969 It'll still be interesting to find out.
6620975 :3
Excellent job on this whole story in general. I am sorry I took so long getting back to you. Nothing to blame but self-admitted laziness. I really appreciate you going to the effort. As usual, splendid job on the exchanges, emotional content, action and wrap-up in all the right places. At least you managed a good victory without resorting to the proverbial "Scooby-Doo Hoax" (i.e. some crook disguising themselves as a supernatural being and/or using special effects to scare everybody off so they can dig for some hidden treasure without interruption, buy up some potentially valuable land dirt cheap or some other similar agenda).
And I would wager, if and when Twi learns that her big brother is actually working to CLEAR their dad, she will regain at least A LITTLE of the respect she once had for him. But I will admit that IS just a guess.
At any rate, splendid job on this story overall.
6909721 personally I am not a fan of the scooby doo hoax trope, plus there is no indication at all i was doing that for Hang 'Em High