Jamie has a dull life. He learns, he hangs out with his best friend Cole and his girlfriend Kiana, and goes through the motions of a normal human life. But none of that matters when a horrible skydiving accident puts him into a coma. When he awakes, he realizes that he and everyone else (or everypony else) are talking horses! How will Jamie deal with his new surroundings, or more importantly, how will he get back home? He'll need an alias, and a mischievous one at that. cover picture is the pony version of Cole, Jamie, or Kiana. I mix it up, Written for my friend Mischief Max.
My first fanfic story and I made it up on the spot. Any advice in the form of comments is highly appreciated, not just disliking the story like a little kid.
Lol, Cole, I love this story.
youll love the next chapter then.
Dr. Horse is on Vicodin.
Hand me my points
681472 this is what happen when the weak minded explore my work
BOOKS ARE DANGEROUS
PLAY MORE VIDEO GAMES
I lost the game. POINT!!!
Internet. POINTS!!
I don't like how mean Kiana is.
683151 I do!
Are you sure it's SAAN?
I like the new writing style.
Oh and good on the serious
ShatteredxDreamAMV?
I'm not sure but should this say twilight instead kiana
"He was here to talk about Rainbow Dash," Kiana said, anger in her mind. "He wanted to know how to get on her good side."
It somewhat confused me
732315 You must be reading it wrong, check again.
732633 oh that does make sense now okay cool
771418 Error 11374265 I have no idea what "Delete" your talking about.
Something like
Cupcake massacre
It's cupcakes, and the last one was My Little Dashie.
Points!
That's me. Where are my points?!?
850724 STORY'S ON HIATUS, NO POINTS
Aaaaaaaaaaaaand this is why you have to pay attention lol but still OUCH
The story should not be on hiatus anymore, POINTS!!!!