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Let me know what you decide on :P
I'll favourite this to see where it goes, the decide on a vote. So far so good.
Yay
Keep it up this is good
now you're posting it here my stories here too man!!! :D
i like this
but why's it getting hate? 
dem big fat meanies
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My guess is this :P
Mainstream bronies: Oh god no! An orignal CHARACTER!
AND HE LOOKS OVERPOWERED!!! LOOK! HE'S BEING PAIRED WITH TWO MARES!! THE HORROR...THE HORROR....
*clicks dislike as much as possible*
amirite?
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probably 
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To each their own I suppose...I don't mind hate as long as there's a valid reason for it
671598 maybe its the strange paragraph thing
maybe idk
I dont have a problem with it but some people might be like:
"Ahh it's new! Dislike!"
Paragraph thing?
I like this story. It may have its flaws, but all-in-all it's still a pretty good and enjoyable fic.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/lolface_Queen_Chrysalis.png
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Then I promise you it only gets better ;3
Ill get chapter 3 up tonight hopefully.
Cool!
read some other fanfics as I wait for this story's next chapter.dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Bonbon_gaze.png
I look forward to reading it.
To tell the truth, Twilight doesn't really strike me as a "hunt down and kill" type of pony. Sure Chrysalis attacked Canterlot, but she was defeated. I don't really feel that Twilight would pursue an already defeated enemy for the sake of ending it once-and-for-all, before it could recover and possibly attack again. Then again, the pursuit of Chrysalis is a plot device for advancing your story, so it's no big deal. I just felt like adding my too bits about my thoughts on Twi's personality. Another thing that was bugging me was from the first chapter. I didn't really like how Dazer's parents just disowned and abandoned him because his appearance had changed. I just feel that while they may be scared, parents wouldn't just write-off their child as a complete monster just on a new appearance. Part of the curse acting upon the minds and actions of others/family to further isolate Dazer, causing his parents and friend to behave like this may be a good way to make the parents seem less like jerks. Just a bit of (hopefully) helpful constructive criticism.
Now I GO
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Your criticism is much appreciated
Don't worry, I'm not one to get butthurt over critiques, especially if they have a point. About Dazers parents though, think of it this way. Your son has left behind a trail of blood. When his best friend runs off and a black creature with sharp teeth spits fire, there can be an assumption that he was eaten. Just a thought. As for Twilight's personality, I agree with her not being a search and destroy pony, but again, I needed a plot advancer and she DOES have a loyalty to protecting the city. So it MIGHT work if she wasn't thinking too much at the time. Again, thanks for the input!
672374 About the assumption that Dazer had been eaten, I must refer you to this quote: ""That isn't our son anymore, RUN FOR YOUR LIVES!" His father screamed." Dazer's father says "anymore", implying that the strange and terrifying new creature that they faced was in fact, their son at one time, and not just a monster that had just eaten their son. That is how it was interpreted in my mind anyway. Also, I do understand that they probably weren't thinking that clearly, what with their minds clouded in primal terror and all.
You're welcome for the input.
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I remember that quote too, then again, I might have the parents return. Snuffles is making a definite return. It's gonna be SO AWESOME!!!
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Sweet! I'm glad to hear it.
So Snuffles is going to come back huh? That's good, he seemed to have a lot more character/story potential. About that, I don't know about you, but with Snuffles' guaranteed return I definitely dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Cloudchaser_dealwithit.png smell a winner.
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I like the story ^_^ you also have the same writing quality as me.
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...is in the process of being written
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This is very enjoyable keep it up
I'm adding in pictures now
Check out my story again in a few mins.
Yay please update fast I really like this story
Man, I now realize how GODAWFUL I really am at drawing >.> Oh well, they're for visual aid mostly...
i like this BUT I WANT ALL THE BITCHY MARES TO PAY MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/discord.png
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He kinda beat the shit out of them >.>
Doesn't that count?
INCOMING UPDATE!!!
676721 PINKIE PIE GOT AWAY dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_RageFace.png *Rage quit*
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Not to worry, Black Daze gives her a piece of his hybrid mind.
Me gusta thus far, keep up the excellent work!
And in case you all didn't know, "I want hospital" is an internet joke. I like to riddle my stories with them!
MORE PLEASE
I like the story but I feel as though they became friends too fast, I figured that both Black Daze and Chrysalis would be a little more stubborn towards each other, since BD did burn Chrysalis' wings a bit and BD was attacked by the Changlings. This is an interesting read so I want to know how this story rolls out
A few things: "Some of the back ponies flew out of fear" I'm pretty sure you meant "black ponies" and you used 'Black creatures/ponies/etc' quite a bit in the fight scene it's already established that he is fighting Changlings and have a description of them so repeating the description over an over feels filling
this chapter is really fun to read, espsally with the Great and Powerful Trixie!
nice touch with bringing Pinkie Pie in
I'm filled with excitement at the end, this should be interesting
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Let me know how it goes.
Response to DJ pony (both mine and hers [lol]):
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uh wouldn't dragons burn the alcohol in there body? you know they have to keep that fire somewhere e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/trollface.png
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my reaction the hole time e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/trollface.png
MOAR
Wow daze is a lucky stallion...
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Apparently not xD my theory is that he has a combustible gas producing organ and the gas he exhales immediately reacts to the oxygen in the air...
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Technically not a stallion xD but 3 mares crushing on him? Pretty lucky I suppose. Better than I could ever do...
Vinyl wasn't my idea...but I thought I made it work...
hmm good
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AND MOAR YOU SHALL HAVE!!!
Sooo close
lol cant wait for the next chapter 
when is it? 
daze gets all the mares
Compared to some of the the other fics I've read.... he gets very little...
another story
YAY
I hope you go Coal's path and let him have both
loved it dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Spike_lolface.png