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I've been on this site for a while, and I've noticed a disturbing lack of tentacle fics with Vinyl Scratch.
So what does a perverted author like me do? He writes one of course!
So I teamed up with a friend of mine, mister BlackSnowyOwl, and we worked on this bad boy for a week. It was
a lot of hard worka half arsed effort, and it was doneto impress the mods on this siteto entertain people while providing a nice plot (If ya know what I mean.) *waggles eyebrows*This was not meant to be entered in a writing contest. So please, don't take it too seriously.
Special thanks to BlackSnowyOwl for doing most of the clop, since as you all know, I suck at it! ^w^
Ooo... A tentacle fic!
Must read later!
Hm....read after Apple.
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Tentacle fic!
You won my heart
Thank you! Liked and favorited
This calls for Hoes & Wine!
when clicked on this, i saw 0 views, and 2 likes, and 1 dislike...not only do we have an insta-like, but we have a insta-disliker...that barrel didn't even give it a chance
...did you say...tentacles?
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hey, when will I get to roll in the hay with Applejack?
see what I did there?
All my likes are belong to you
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....for later. Too busy to read right now.
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Definitely gonna have to check this one out!
I'll hate you 9f I don't get a taviscratch + wubsy threesome
@The ending Author's note.
Hate you for writing this? What the fuck are you talking about?!
This. Is. AWESOME!
Dear goddesses above! This story deserves more than just a sequel!
I honestly know how he settles in, his daily life, and what possible adventures he
could find himself partaking in now that he found home in good ol' Equestria.
Well...I love it
Jeridiah is best Alien.
Congrats on making an awesome Clop/Cute Romance story.
All I have left to say is
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Cute. Thumbs up!
Well... That was... Different to say the least.
I liked it. It is sweet and flowed pretty well. I thumbs up from me.
Hate you? I could fuckin' kiss you! That was awesome!
I really love it! Vinyl is one of my fav BG ponies and i like the Octi/Vinyl ships as well...but this, this was awesome
Jarediah is such a gentlemen lol 
and now i demand Octi/Vinyl/Jarediah threesome fun ^_^ if ya want that is lol
Awesome story! There isn't enough stories like this around here, kind of a shame it's a one shot lol
I cant help but feel this story was made for me
pretty good!
1454918 ERMAHGERD!!!
Can it be!? The absolute Queen of Kink? The Collosus of Clop? The Princess of Plot? The Great and Powerful castortroy?
...Why yes, I believe it is!!
Welcome to my page, author that I highly admire!
THIS IS AWESHUM!!! Totally worth the (lack of) effort ^.^ Let me know how it was, I'd like some critique from an expert.
Okay, sorry about that, fangasm moment over. Whew, we might need some paper towels here now...
will there be another or was this a one-off. [closes his eyes, crosses his fongers and hopes for more]
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I am truly humbled by your welcome. That's the first fangasm I've received in any context, so I made sure to save a screencap.
I was definitely intrigued by your story and, after reading it, I felt you definitely rewarded my interest. Vinyl felt very real in this story, especially the way she talked. Sometimes when people write another character's dialogue, it comes off as robotic, but you certainly didn't fall into that trap. I'd believe what you wrote is what Vinyl would say in such a situation.
But what impressed me the most was the way you handled the sexual component of the story. I liked how you depicted sex as something ponies understood, but at the same time treated as something perfectly natural. Yes, she understands that it's taboo, and she expresses reservations about having a sexual encounter, but I like that the sex isn't the end-all be-all of the story. The intimate encounter she has with the creature, despite it being an alien, thus follows a very believable track. And I was thrown by how loving and soothing the experience of reading it was. Vinyl seemed like the kind of girl I'd like to find someday. She just seemed so damn cool.
Probably the only thing I would suggest is to become more graphic with the description of Jeridiah's tentacles. You did a good job explaining what he looked like and what the tentacles were like when we're first introduced to him, but I would've liked more descriptions of how his tentacles worked their magic on Vinyl. Maybe on top of them vibrating, they could get fatter or change like an erect cock, or become wet and slither over her body. I felt I really understood what the sex felt like to Vinyl, and I could understand her body's response to it, but I couldn't quite grasp what it felt like to Jeridiah, nor how the tentacles responded to a wet marehood. This can be explained from Vinyl's perspective if you prefer - remember that Vinyl seems down for anything in this story, so consider that she may be excited by every little strange thing Jeridiah is doing to her, not just the tentacles' penetration. This is a small concern, however, and I don't think the details need to be exaggerated too much because that might mess up the playful nature of the sex scene and the smoothness of the transition from the first conversation into sex.
But again, I really enjoyed your story. I found it playful and cute, driven by the fun-loving nature of Vinyl herself toward a sex scene that matched her personality quite well. Thumbs up, watched, favorited. Good job, good sir.
Is it just me or does Jarediah sound a lot like his speicies is the same as slenderman?
I thought of an entire theory for this: slenderman is this type of alien, but came to earth instead, got trapped/lost, and is near starving but has broken the code and is trying to feed off the main character by force.
Also this story was AWESOME
1461617 Screen-cap eh? I regret nothing!
I should probably do a Taviscratch/Jarediah scene using that advice you gave me. Don't worry, I will make it flow and not be too spontaneous or forced. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_Colgate_beam.png
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Sounds like a awesome idea, Jexx. Whatever you decide to do, you crafted very likeable characters in this story, and you'll only get better from here.
1466929 You're killing me with awesome, man! You're really killing me. //dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/Vinyl_Scratch_lolface.png
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Aww Man!!! If anyone hates you for that Jex, I'd be greatly disappointed. This story really made me feel the characters, and I got a couple of good laughs out of it too, (If that wasn't the intention, don't fret, its just part of who I am, I just love laughter...
) And on top of that, I got some writing advice from one of your heroes, and it's always cool to get advice, especially in that manner. Keep up the good work!
This story was... different from things I normally read... but still it was a pretty good read.
By the way, I made a reading of it. Link is HERE
". . . criss cross (applesauce :D) . . ."
LOL
Leopard animal craze! and that about ends that ,,, I think
1610878 Another day fo' shizzle
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god damn i see u everywhere
Why the hell was I listening to metal while I read this? Seriously, WHY?
>Writing tentacle fic.
>Has no friends that like that.
>Has no research material on female perspective.
>Finds author who did it twice with resounding success.
I have found my Master, and my research material. This should be interesting...
1774628 PM me, I shall teach you my ways.
1890726 Huzzah! ^0^
Now to get started on the next chapter.
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You had me all excited that this had a new chapter.
1890819 I was typing it, then I accidentally hit 'publish' ;~;
I dearly want to see Octavia's reaction to the new alien in her house being a sex alien.
...this needs a squeal placed about 4 months later when vinyl finally talks Octavia into having some "fun" which then becomes a threesome
CONFOUND THESE PONIES!
I was hoping to read a vinyl octy alien threesome
But damn this was discriptive
this needs two more chapters one with octy and one with a threesome
This story was fucking awesome!!
Should totally do a part 2 do this :)
to my perspective, it was a good story, no, GREAT story. I am quite frankly amazed by your work.1890939 I have come to a conclusion. This needs a sequel. One where more sexy times happen. Possibly with Octavia (But that part is optional.) But yeah. Sequel needed.
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Because dear, metal is the best soundtrack to clop. Clearly.
As for the story, I have been meaning to read more well executed tentacle fictions. Your mission, such as it is, has been accomplished to my excessive satisfaction.