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Yosh-E-O


I am aspiring author who enjoys writing various works of fantasy in which have a cutesy touch

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Scootaloo is now a young mare who still has a 'blank flank'. Upon learning of how Sweetie Belle got her Cutie Mark, Scoots is now determined to take her many years of education, experience, and love for extreme sports to the next level to see if she truly has what it takes to go beyond being flightless and finally take the skies.

This story was inspired by the art of ChrisRainicorn on Deviant Art. You can find the original image by going to http://hapo-works.deviantart.com/art/ATG-Day-14-Congrats-558282914

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That was absolutely fantastic.:pinkiehappy:

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I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was looking to write something uplifting in which shows the payoff of determination over time. Scootaloo, to me, seems like one'd never give up on a dream and would see it through no matter what. :)

6429992 Everyone should take her example in never giving up.

While what was there was well written, it feels like it needs to be longer.

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It is always a difficult balance between content, quality, and length.

I'm hopeful as I continue to write, I can better balance it all out so works like this one can give more readers a fulfilling experience without leaving them feeling something was missing.

Thanks for reading and commenting. :)

6440561 You're welcome

“Rainbow Dash reached into a saddlebag

Delete the quotation mark.

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Whoops! Sometimes you get so excited when you write that you miss little things like that.

Did you like the story despite this grammatical error?

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