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Puppo530


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Rainbow Dash was your normal filly with billionaires for parents. She loved them and they loved her. Everyone was happy until the one fateful night coming home from the movies. That night, Rainbow saw her parents be murdered in front of her own eyes. When their killer is released from prison on good behavior, she takes upon the persona of a superhero named Batmare. She vows to her parents vengeance upon their murderer and all of the criminal scum in Ponyville.

It looks like tons of people have already come up with this idea, but none have done it with Rainbow Dash, right?

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 59 )

Are you the mod behind this blog?
http://batmareandrobinaloo.tumblr.com/

If not, then sorry, somepony beat you to "Rainbow Dash as Batmare" idea.

>>Fetch

Great. Well, I guess I'll continue this. That is an ask blog, and this will be a fanfiction. They're different, right?

You get a thumbs up just because my mind can't stop going NANANANANANANANA BATMARE!

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Yeah, ask blogs are usually silly little things, this actually sounds like a serious story.

TAKE THAT FIRST BLOCK MYAHAHAHA
*evil mastermind at work here* :moustache:

Critique on your story... well it's an okay start but, it would be more interesting if you mixed up your first sentence in each paragraph instead of
she this or Rainbow Dash that. That would make the story for me. It is an easy habit to get into, I've been in it before. The paragraphs are also a little short and the story kind of bland. Not that I could write much better though:rainbowlaugh: Finally, Tank is best butler. Also everyone just entirely skipped that wall of text I wrote didn't they:trixieshiftleft: Well I'll find you if you did.:pinkiecrazy:
jk, jk

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Can't wait to see were this goes. Also, you need a constant villain, and a bunch of sub-villains. I wonder who is going to replace the Joker?
Rainbow Dash speed on the next chapter.:scootangel:

Whooves is Gordon? Does that mean Dinky's gonna be Batfilly?

I like how you finally decided to add some dialogue. It added more, well I don't know the word. A better connection with RD

this interests FireFlash. Tracked.

...Wow. Rainbow Dash really sucks at being Batmare.:unsuresweetie: She kills ponies, her identity is found out by her nemesis AND an eight-year-old, and worst of all, she took a day off! *GASP!!!*:pinkiegasp:

712349. Well, she did kill her nemesis soon after...

Great Galloping Galas, Batmare! Wow, this story is awesome. BTW, Pi-, the slice of cake, "Ponyville still has a sweet tooth." Kinda adds up to Pinkie Pie, doesn't it?
Keep it up.:scootangel:

Batmare! Love it. XD
Do you mind that I write a story similar to this? But a different pony to play RD's role with a different name?

718130 I don't care. There are already tons of Batmare stories out there.

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Yeah, the next chapter is going to be even shorter. I'm pretty much done with it and it's under 1000 words. :twilightsheepish:

The kid sidekick got captured? No way! The kid sidekick NEVER get captured!

omg,
they ran?
like seriously?
MUST KNOW WHY

- WILL ALWAYS BE YOUR LOYAL FOLLOWER

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Only have a theory myself but think the villain ponies are Pinky-Clown, Quizzler-Twilght, Peacock-Rarity, and Poison Oak-Fluttershy. But then again I could be way off the mark and they are other characters entirely.

750233 well she always wanted to be a tree...
closest thing i guess lol
and it does make sense
but...



oh well, lets just see what happens

750233 You forgot Scareworm. My opinion, Clown=Pinkie, Quizzler=Twilight, Peacock=Rarity, Poison Oak=Applejack, and Scareworm=Fluttershy.But they may not even be members of the mane 6 at all.:scootangel:

Yay! Cliffhangers and ellipses!

Also, any guesses on who the Mare Hatter is?

Standing on a cloud... that is Pegasi magic.
Casting a spell... that is unicorn magic.
Given this information, we are to assume the Mare Hatter has both wings and a horn, so...
:pinkiegasp: THE MARE HATTER IS AN ALICORN!!!! *faints*:scootangel:

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Or she can use Twilight's cloud standing spell. I probably should have noted that.

Fixed.

But that doesn't mean it's not an alicorn.

Yea we dont need no stinkin dialogue.. Thats it Rainbow Dash :pinkiehappy:
Go do it :pinkiehappy:

noo not Pinkie Pie :pinkiecrazy:
and yea tell her to keep her identity secret :fluttershyouch:

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Well, my bet is on the Mare Hatter being Trixie. Was going to go with Discord, but using Mare suggest female. And she seems to be capable of doing that.

this chapter is bad and you should feel bad...



anyways disregard what you said, it was the P.S that wanted me to write that XD
anyways its always nice to see a story end, especially a story this good
i admit, the ending was a bit rushed, but it was good nonetheless

It was Trixie... Of course it was Trixie. Why? Revenge? Hatred? Can't she just get over being beaten?
Anyway, cool story bro.:scootangel:

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By the way, you are too good at guessing. Either that or it was too obvious...

Also, I would like to quote my previous chapter:
"To get you all to turn on each other, of course! I knew that if you were all against one another, and hated each other, there would be no way that you could work together to defeat me! "

ok it was short but Well maybe you can make up for it in the sequel :scootangel:

Comment posted by Puppo530 deleted Mar 20th, 2013

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I don't know what you're talking about. Why would it matter if it's April Fools or not?

I liked the way you linked everything together but you're right, this is way to short :raritydespair: you should drag it out more if you ever consider revising it :twilightsmile:

712349 dude that way its so intesting because its not the same old batmare story and peace sack robin and batgirl know who batman so you cant go nick picking on that.

2369591 Can you make another Batmare story based on the Tim Burton Movie?

Rainbow Dash did not cry at the funeral. Her father told her never to cry. She honored his wishes. She didn’t feel a need to cry. She felt nothing as she stared at her lifeless parents. She felt nothing as they were lowered into the ground. She felt nothing as they were buried, never to be seen again.

A person who cannot feel sadness, guilt or sympathy are known as psychopaths or sociopaths.

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