• Published 29th May 2012
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Batmare - Puppo530



Rainbow Dash loved her parents. When they were murdered, she swore vengeance...

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Chapter 6 - I Wanna Be Your Friend Forever

Chapter 6

I Wanna Be Your Friend Forever

Downwards the two mares fell. Rainbow Dash's wings were frozen by the Mare Hatter's spell. The Mare Hatter was too distracted by fighting off Rainbow to save them from dying with a levitation spell. It was Twilight, running to the edge of the cloud on which the manor stood, casting a spell on the two ponies. They levitated a few feet off the ground before being dropped.

"We have to get down there!" Twilight yelled to the group still in the manor. "Rainbow needs help!" They all got in the hot air balloon. Twilight pulled on the cord that opened the top and they descended gradually.

On the ground, Rainbow was thrown off the villain. She quickly ran around a barrel and bucked it at the Mare Hatter. The villain dove out of the way. A beam of green light flew towards Rainbow Dash. She ducked as the beam tore up the barrel next to her. She jumped over two more powerful beams and rolled into a bush. The Mare Hatter readied her horn to send another destruction spell when a squirrel hit her face. When she got it off, Rainbow was on top of her. They rolled backwards, the super villain sending many spells at Rainbow.

Before the balloon had touched the ground, Twilight and the others jumped off. The Mare Hatter used leverage on Rainbow to toss her in the air. She grabbed her with a levitation spell. The rest of the gang caught up with the two fighting ponies. They readied themselves to attack the Mare Hatter, who was holding Batmare in the air.

"Don't come any closer! If you take one more step, or attack me, or try to attack me in any way, Rainbow goes flying."

"She's already a pegasus." Scootaloo commented.

"Yeah, she's a pegasus without the use of her wings, and she's about to take a trip to the mountains over there." She nodded in the direction of the mountain range to the north of them.

"A teleportation trip?" questioned Scootaloo.

"Nope." the villain imitated Big Macintosh. "More like a falling-to-your-death kind of trip."

"Oh."

The Mare Hatter slowly backed away from the group, dragging Rainbow Dash through the air with her. When she had gotten a bit more of a distance from the friends of her captive, the villain pulled a hat out from her saddlebag. She used another levitation spell to make it hover just over Rainbow's head. Before she could begin to control her captive, Rainbow Dash lashed out at the mind control device, sending it sprawling on the ground. With the villain distracted for a brief second, Twilight had the perfect opportunity.

A beam of purple light struck the Mare Hatter square in the face. She flew backwards, crashing into the house behind her. Dust and crumblings of rock and brick smoldered over her body. She got to her feet, coughed out some dust, and began to charge at the six friends plus Scootaloo. Twilight sent another spell the villain's way. The levitation spell hoisted the mare upside down into the air.

"Who are you?" Twilight demanded.

"I'll never tell you the truth!" The Mare Hatter struggled to get free, but Twilight was too strong for her.

Scootaloo was confused. "Wait, was that the truth or a lie? If you lied about never telling the truth, that means that you would tell the truth. And if you told the truth by saying that you would never tell the truth, then that would be a para-"

"Shut up you stupid filly!"

"I've had enough." Twilight ripped off the mask. What she saw were violet eyes, surrounded by a blue mane. She immediately recognized the face. "Trixie?"

"Yes! It was me! And I would've gotten away with it too if it wasn't for you meddling ponies!"

Twilight sighed and shook her head at her captive. "We're going to have to teach you a lesson, Trixie."

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A warm, spring air blew over the ponies. They saw a very irate blue mare being shoved into a police car. Her horn would be removed and she would be locked in a padded cell on the moon for the rest of her days. Princess Celestia would see to it personally that she would not escape like the last prisoner of the moon.

As for Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash, they had decided to form an elite group of crime-fighting heroes. Twilight Sparkle took on the persona of Supermare. Fluttershy became the Green Tree. Rarity took on the name of Wonder Pony. Applejack decided to become Spidermare. Pinkie Pie chose to be the Flash. And Rainbow Dash stayed as Batmare. Together they cleaned up the streets of Ponyville. And they all lived happily ever after.

AN: Well, that's a rather abrupt ending to this story. Oh well. What are you going to do about it? Complain in the comments? See if I care. Anyways, thanks to everyone who favorited, commented on, and liked this story. I don't go around to each user's page telling them thanks, because that sounds a bit shallow. So thank you for following this terrible story. Hopefully you'll follow other terrible ones of mine in the future.

-puppo530

P.S. Man, this is a short chapter. I feel ashamed publishing it.

Comments ( 10 )

this chapter is bad and you should feel bad...



anyways disregard what you said, it was the P.S that wanted me to write that XD
anyways its always nice to see a story end, especially a story this good
i admit, the ending was a bit rushed, but it was good nonetheless

It was Trixie... Of course it was Trixie. Why? Revenge? Hatred? Can't she just get over being beaten?
Anyway, cool story bro.:scootangel:

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By the way, you are too good at guessing. Either that or it was too obvious...

Also, I would like to quote my previous chapter:
"To get you all to turn on each other, of course! I knew that if you were all against one another, and hated each other, there would be no way that you could work together to defeat me! "

ok it was short but Well maybe you can make up for it in the sequel :scootangel:

Comment posted by Puppo530 deleted Mar 20th, 2013

I liked the way you linked everything together but you're right, this is way to short :raritydespair: you should drag it out more if you ever consider revising it :twilightsmile:

2369591 Can you make another Batmare story based on the Tim Burton Movie?

"I would've gotten away with it too if it weren't for you meddling ponies" WHY THE SCOOBYDOO REFERENCE?!? Jk that was a real nice reference to Scooby doo.

As for Twilight, Applejack, Fluttershy, Rarity, Pinkie Pie, and Rainbow Dash, they had decided to form an elite group of crime-fighting heroes. Twilight Sparkle took on the persona of Supermare. Fluttershy became the Green Tree. Rarity took on the name of Wonder Pony. Applejack decided to become Spidermare. Pinkie Pie chose to be the Flash. And Rainbow Dash stayed as Batmare. Together they cleaned up the streets of Ponyville. And they all lived happily ever after.

Superman, Green Lantern, Wonder Woman, Spiderman, Flash.

Spider-Man is Marvel not DC!

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Dc and Marvel Crossover happen

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