Derpy loves her daughter. She likes her friends in Ponyville as well. But things take a turn for the worse when Derpy gets in an accident.
As written by Derpy and Rainbow Dash in their journals.
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dawwwwww
umm wow that is ston i cryed at the end
..that last entry hit home for me, man. It was completely unexpected, but totally made sense. A beautiful story.
wait, she dropped a box labeled "fragile" but it is stated that there was silverware in it, don't get me wrong it was a good story but, since when is silverware fragile?
This was actually pretty
good.
) yet poignant.
Brief (as is life
One thing, though: mouth-to-mouth resuscitation.
750816 Perhaps silverware wasn't all that was in the box?
750816
Really old, antique silverware can be considered fragile. But just so you won't argue against that, there was also china in the box.
Happy now?
You killed Derpy!
Goodbye, author. *Straps the last of the C4 to you*
*BEEP BEEP BEEP*
WHAT THE FU---
BOOM.
Still a great story, though. I almost cried (I still have a little dignity... Err, right?)
750971
I would do the same thing if anyone killed off Derpy.
Thanks for all of the comments!
NO!!!!
That ending seemed abrupt... now if you'll excuse me I think I need to go
Maybe you could provide a reason for her death? Otherwise i'm just going to say it was a punctured lung or something from a shard of china or a broken rib.
DERPY DIED?
COOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOLLL!!!!!!!!!!
I would have liked to see a more detailed description on HOW she died, though.
751387
Death is abrupt, isn't it?
751426
751754
She experienced a sudden cardiac death from the trauma induced by the fall.
(I might have just read a bunch of wikipedia pages to find a possible excuse...)
752457 Just kinda seemed unnecessary.
This story is the second eeriest thing related to death I've seen today.
To be fair, I don't think number 1 today will ever be beaten by anything
You killed DERPY!?!?!:
p.twimg.com/AksVk-9CMAAc60z.jpg:large
Instead of doing the whole
The Two Journals
IMPROVED VERSION
More info on why it's improved here.
thing for this one I'll just put the improved version in the comments so I don't get angry messages from people who are getting spammed in their favorites box. Eventually I'll put these as their own individual chapters.
Here it goes:
Derpy died in some freak accident.
Rainbow Dash cried.
Rainbow Dash also dies from grief.
The End
I lost a friend in a similar way, a few years back. So aside from the Gutpunch i absolutely loved the story. i hate you for the feels tho.
I liked the story, but her death seemed out of place. it was so unexpected. I hope rainbow can do more for dinky than dump her in an orphanage. that stupid father!!!