Trust takes years to build and seconds to break. Rainbow Dash and Derpy are great friends. But Rainbow Dash is still haunted by her past years, and the heavy emotional toll that she suffered at the hands of her father. She can’t seem to forget. And neither can Derpy.
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Uhhh....?
2925215 I know it's weird
I was inspired by this one scene
So this entire fic was based off of that scene?
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2925310 That gave the inspiration for the fight. Not the whole fic
Oh my, I'm going to love this, aren't I...
2925215
Hi BRO!
2926422 Working hard on the next chapter, which will probably be the conclusion. I do a lot of my writing in lab when I have time
2926447
Well, it certainly looks very interesting. If you kill somepony, make it detailed and painful, something that will give me time to cry my eyes out.
2926464 dude seriously?
Also hi
I've decided to make it a bit more interesting, since I got some new ideas while writing. Expect more chapters!
2928000
HI!! And yes, seriously. I don't like quick and meaningless deaths. I want it to be slow, detailed, and heart-wrenching..
Better have that chapter up soon
I'm working on it
I'll have it out before the end of the day
i refuse to let you end it with 4
2936951 Haha, we'll see how it goes. I already started it, and it feels like a long chapter, sooo it might be out tomorrow or the day after.
2936985 Well i wont be here till the fourth of august, so...
2937021 I will definitely finish it before then. Don't worry, I'd never leave a follower hangin'
2937041 Im leaving tonight, so i really dont think you can..
Pfft better be
This is amazing! Moaaaaarrrr
2946030 Thanks! I'm working on the last chapter right now. It'll be out soon
2946060 awesome, but I have to ask, what's with the sex tag? something in the next chapter we don't know about? ;3
2946143 I put that there just in case some readers were sensitive to Dash almost getting raped, but I guess that seems silly now, so I'll take it down
2946148 heh, Was just wondering ;3
When Rainbow was fighting Derpy this is the first Image that came to mind: images5.fanpop.com/image/photos/31500000/rainbow-vs-derpy-my-little-pony-friendship-is-magic-31555416-960-800.jpg
Then I finished the story and I was like: 2.bp.blogspot.com/-JhbaxLz86sc/TfI69bTkSpI/AAAAAAAAAiY/WCOrhTqnG8o/s1600/9580%2B-%2Babsurd_res%2BAtomicGreymon%2Bemo%2Bemo_pie%2Bpie%2Bpinkamena_diane_pie%2Bpinkie%2Btransparent.png
2951099 Yea! That first image inspired the fight. And I was sad too when I wrote that scene
2951718 Well, it was still really good, not many appreciate stories that have not so happy endings
2951813 Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed it
Regrets stealing my moms smartphone?
None.
STOP!! FEELS!! WHAT ARE YOU DOING?!
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3694343 Haha sorry >:D
wow rainbow dashes father was a dick, excuse the language but he is