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Rinnaul
I do nothing of merit. On occasion, I give the impression of being creative, but this is a deception. I am merely derivative in clever ways.
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Sad little story, the story has a childish feel in the writing good enough to make it credible in my opinion.
I agree with FicusCat, nice job.
Tears were shed :'(
This is so sad, I cried.
Sad, good sad writing. Bring on the feels
I was close to tears. Poor Derpy.
Why... why would you write this you mosnter
Erf. I think my heart just popped. I know what it's like to lose a loved one, believe me. This story talks like a child does and does it well. Fave and an upvote from me. Very well done.
My fell-o-meter is at a 15, you broke it. emoticons can not describe the sadness I fell for a little filly losing a loved one, but dammit, Dinky? Why Dinky?
Don't take this in a bad way, but judgingby the comments I can't bear to read this.
Damn... this was incredibly powerful and very well done.
This was awesome... Thank you Rin. I knew I would love it
I remember a time when a family member I cared about died. She only opened her eyes once before we had to pull the plug... and it was at me. Darn these tears.
Fuck you. I was having a perfectly good day, but then you come along and steamroll right over my feels. Why would you do this to me? WHY?!
...'scuse me while I go hug my mom...
Omg dude you are a poor hearted soul leaving like that
I came here to laugh and have fun with dinky being alone without anyone to watch her!.... BUT I DIDNT COME HERE TO FEEL LIKE THIS!
The narrator sounds like a child, and that really helps your story here.
Thumbs up.
SO MUCH FEELS
That was both amazing and horrifying at the same time. I'm genuinely impressed. That hit me in the stomach like Babe Ruth with a Louisville Slugger
Oh mi God!! That was so beautiful!! You made me cry!!
Me when Dinky saw Rainbow carrying something in the distance...
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WHY U DO DIS???
I'd really like a follow up chapter or story showing what happened with Dinky.
Congrats on the feature. You earned it.
Edit: Well, that didn't last long . . .
Damn this feels! Damn them to hell!
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Yeah. It was there for about ten minutes, but it didn't have enough heat to stay there any longer, unfortunately.
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Wow. Even that is more than I expected this to do.
And tried to edit my reply, then it got glitchy and I wound up deleting it in the hopes of making a new one before you responded.
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I know what's going to happen to her, but I'm not sure I want to tack it onto the end of this one. Might put it up as a Slice of Life sequel though.
>>Everyone else
Your tears only make me strongerThank you all for reading this, and glad you enjoyed it.Why do you do this to us author?
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I hate the rain on days like this
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I was starting to read this in my English class today, but I had to stop myself because I knew what was coming. I couldn't burst into tears in the middle of class, I would get caught and get some pretty weird and maybe a few worried looks.
This was a beautifully written story, and no follow up is needed. That should be up to the reader to decide. Thank you very much for giving me something to cry about. I really needed it.
Look at the comments
Didn't want to read it
Read it anyway
Cried
Did not regret it
I hate you so much, author.
Why are my eyes leaking.
I don't even know.
Oh my gosh.
What the hell.
I hate you with a passion.
Because I'm crying.
And it's your fault.
Why.
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My eyes are leaking a lot.
You deserve a like, favorite, and follow for making my eyes leak.
And that is what I will give you.
Oh my god this saddness I'm feeling right now,
So many tears right now.
It's bambi all over again
Eugh. Why you do this? Shows and stories don't make me cry.
This one did.
So did Doctor Who, twice, but never mind that.
I also cried at THoTS (The Hanging of Twilight Sparkle)
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This was amazing...ly sad.
But still amazing
Poor dinky
.
*walks into thread*
*smacks author in the face*
*leaves thread*
Favorited. Liked. Followed.
Excellent work.
Also, this:
The feels on the bus go round and round...
Many of the other comments have said what I want to say. When Dash was talking to Twilight, and the slim hope was becoming slimmer, I had to stop and remind myself that this was only a story, Derpy was still very much alive. That didn't stop me from thinking 'Dear God, why?' though. This was well written, and Dinky's narration makes it all the better. That said, I want to hate you for this. I want to dispise you for making such a story. I want to condem you for creating a world where this is true. But I can't, and I'm not sure why.
Deus tecum.
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You bastard...You gave me the bucking feels...
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4037369 THoTS was the worst for feels, I was sobbing like a baby.
The same happened for this too but I'm in class right now and people are looking at me funny. I'd better say I just yawned and my eyes were watering...
Oh my Faust, the feels!
Poor little Dinky!! These are some deep feels… Excuse me, I have to wipe away some liquid sadness…
How could you do this against poor Dinky?
Son of a submariner you'll pay for this!
And have a fave and a like while I'm at it.
With regards.
Kefka.
ARG! What is everyone's fixation on killing Derpy? Is it because you know we will cry? Very well done though, I didn't guess that Derpy had died until Dinky left the house and spoke to Dash. Then it was all build up to the inevitable.conclusions of sadness... I'm gonna go find a comedy to help me feel better.
why is this so sad